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Reviews For The Trouble with Harry
Author's Response: Yes! I always thought Severus Snape as a dad would be such a push over. Oh, there would be grumbling and grousing, but he would be so squishy on the inside. I always see him as a man who has had little love in his life. Even though Eileen loves him, her way of showing it is his way also, with harsh words that mask tender feelings. A young Harry, with his great capacity to love and his real need to give an receive it would be the best thing for such a man. As for the dragon plushie, I decided that with all that happened to him that day, he really needed something to confide to and to hug. That's why police officers (at least in this state) carry stuffed animals in the trunks of their cars. They hand them out in emergency situations to children who need it. The toys do seem to calm them down, and give them something to hug when they are frightened. Petunia. Don't get me started on that woman. She's as bad as Umbridge and dealt more damage to both Harry and Dudley than Umbridge ever could. Thanks for the thoughtful and kind review. I really appreciate it.
Great job Tambra. Can't wait for more. Author's Response: Thanks for your review. I'm glad you're enjoying the story.
Author's Response: Heh. That is all.
No, really, thanks for your review. I have started the next chapter and it lookis like it is going to be REALLY fun to write. Woot!
I'm also rather impressed that he didn't go nuclear when Albus said he wanted Harry to stay with Snape in his quarters. Bless 'im. He wants to do right by Lily. And he probably sees himself in Harry. MORE! Author's Response: Well, of course Snape would grouse and moan about buying Harry toys, and of course he would be a complete jerk about it, but he is a softy. I'm purposely writing a younger Severus for the reason that he hasn't built the entire scenario about Harry being James. He's not quite as bitter becaue life, while it hasn't often been fair to him, hasn't completely beaten him down. He still has hope for his future. Thanks for the kind words. I'm already working on chapter 4, not too far into it, but I do have some words down. Oh, and next week? I have the whole week off. Woot! More time for story!
I like this story Author's Response: While Lily is not my favorite character, I think she is also fairly desperate to keep her child from two fairly bad knowns. Petunia she knows is vindictive and just a big ol' witch, and not the magical kind, and Sirius is extremely reckless, as we all see from his actions after the Potters were killed. Is it fair that Lily wants Snape to be her child's guardian, the very child she created after dumping him for his enemey? No, not at all, but for the reasons I've given, I think she has a valid concern. Also, it wouldn't be much of a Sevitis if Snape didn't end up with Harry, would it. ;) Thanks for the kind words. I'm glad you're enjoying it so far.
It's funny (and real) how his mum is bossing him around. Author's Response: Thanks. I always thought that Severus would let his mother boss him around. He might not like it, but he does love her.
It took me out of the story for a moment, and you could convey the concept without doing that if you edited the line to read "All because the little prince dressed as a pauper hadn't been informed..." Great job with the letter. At first, I thought it was a bit of story-required revisionist history, having Lily write "I ruined his life," but on reflection, I think it's true to character. A lot of women, not just young ones, tend to blame themselves for the actions of the men in their lives. Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I don't know that I meant that as an author insertion. It's Severus' stream of conciousness that I'm portraying. It's just hard to do that without actually breaking out the italics and such. I'll go back and re-read it to see if I need to revise it. I could actually see Lily taking on the same amount of guilt for Snape's later actions as Severus did for Voldemort's actions with the Potter family. I think it's human nature to assume some guilt in the face of tragedy. These two do seem to be alike in that sense, at least in my take on them.
Severus' characterization is spot on, and you deftly wove bits of background into the story in a way that set the scene without info dumping. At first I thought Severus had carpal tunnel, but the pain in his knees and ankles make me think RA. Guess I'll have to read on and find out. ;) Author's Response: Oh, I think Eileen's marriage was well beyond bad into toxic. More will be explained later. Hmm.. I think you'll have to read more to find out what is the deal with Severus and his aches. Thanks for the review. I really appreciate them.
I really enjoy the character development of Eileen Snape. Like Lily, I'm sure she felt guilt over the way she was forced to raise Severus so she tried to make up for it with Harry. Love shopping at Tesco's! Author's Response: Aw, thanks LZ. I really appreciate your kindness. I have never actually been to Tesco's. There is never a need for that store when you're a tourist. I did, however, surf the web and imaginary shopped there.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I have always wanted to write Eileen with an adult Severus. I'm glad you like their relationship. It's how I always imagined them to interact. I've had a problem with Lily since we found out how she dumped him when he needed her most. She wasn't a good friend at all to him, and I really wanted to show that she had learned from her mistake. Their relationship didn't end just because of him. And really, she knew about his home life. How could she treat him so callously and not expect him to become what he did? I have to admit, it irks me in stories where Dumbledore just dumps Harry on Snape. It's so totally outside cannon and is unbelievable. I wanted a plausible situation for Dumbledore to be able to turn Harry to Severus, and I wanted Severus to receive some redemption in the process. Your review is fantastic, by the way. Do you write? |
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