| Title: The Champion
| 15 Feb 2016 3:32 pm
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| Reviewer: PharaohsLoyalMagician (Anonymous)
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This is great so far. You were correct in the reader feeling sad, I am. I am glad that Amos stood up for Harry and that Severus is beginning to care for Harry. I also love how Dudley seems to me genuinely curious about the Wizarding world and is getting along better with Harry. I hope they stay in contact. You're a wonderful author and writer. I look forward to more updates. Cheers and ta.
PS: I think this deserves more than a 10.
| Title: The Champion
| 15 Jan 2016 12:55 pm
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| Reviewer: Sally (Anonymous)
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Please continue this one soon.
Will you be continuing this?
Author's Response: Eventually. I never abandon stories. I have a lot of stories and I try to finish them all.
Love it do you plan on updating, or have you abandoned it. Hope not because I can't wait till the next chapter.
I really liked it, please continue writing this :) Can't wait to know what happens next.
Hope you continue this one, it is quite good.
This story is amazing. Please write more!
| Title: The Champion
| 24 Apr 2014 9:01 am
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| Reviewer: :) (Anonymous)
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Great structure to your story, and i loved the Harry/Snape reaction after Vernon's outburst, though i think it would have been a bit longer. Waiting for update!!
*sniff sniff* CEDRIC!!!!!! NOOO!!!!!! ooh ooh. *waves hand erratically* i have an idea!! i have an idea!! how about they find wormtail and prove Sirius's innocents. then Sirius and Remus get married and adopt harry with Severus and they live together? this was a really great chapter. i cant wait for the next chapter. thank you so much for this. :)
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