Super! Really like it. Ans Sev care;) Sweet.
And in water maybe some dead body?:)
oooo great chapter hmmm mayb the squid could be in the water n harry saw a tentacle
D'awww....Now I'm really regretting not siding with HP last night. I really need to know what happens next!
Great story so far, JA! Thanks so much for sharing! =)
Ugh, why must Harry continually act without thinking? Then again, I suppose he is a bit on the delirious side at the moment...Hope Snape can figure something out!
Yay! Snape found Harry! And the cat seems to have survived, as well, lol.
Ah! This is so good! ...but what happened to the cat on the table? *gulp* Did it drown?
| Title: Not That Strong
| 25 Apr 2013 8:46 pm
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| Reviewer: Svarra (Anonymous)
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And now I've read chapter 4. So ignore my previous review, my bad.
Author's Response: Lol. It wouldn't be much of a story if they were all rescued right away from the disaster would it?
| Title: A Snape Kind Of Night
| 25 Apr 2013 8:41 pm
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Why doesn't Harry accio his broom like he did in Goblet of Fire? It seems like there is a giant plot hole in that it seems the characters have all collectively forgotten that there are brooms in towers that aren't flooded.
Maybe this will be explained later?
| Title: Not That Strong
| 25 Apr 2013 8:05 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Just wondering why they can't use a patronus to summon help? Great chapter thank you
| Title: Floundering
| 25 Apr 2013 7:58 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Great chapter loved the flashback perhaps more of those?
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