| Title: What Lurks In The Deep
| 14 Feb 2014 5:22 am
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| Reviewer: kyla chance (Anonymous)
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Please continue this story. It's awesome!
| Title: What Lurks In The Deep
| 23 Jan 2014 11:01 pm
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| Reviewer: Kyoko (Signed)
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I really like this story a lot! Finally something that differs from the usual "Harry got abused by the Dursleys and Severus saves him" stuff you read here all the time. There are a few things that seem a bit unrealistic to me, but it's still in a limit I can take, especially as I think that Severus is very well in character. Harry, too I think.
I do hope you still plan on continuing this :)
aww they got separated not fair. :( great chapter. cant wait for the next one. :)
omg!! a cliff hanger!!! nooo!!! Don't let that damn Kelpie hurt my Sev!! I look foward to your next update!
| Title: What Lurks In The Deep
| 03 Nov 2013 6:18 am
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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Very good story so far. Nasty cliffhanger though. Update soon.
I do not like cliff hangers...it's so good to see the other Natural Disasters stories out there...I tend to get motivated when I read them and then I start typing...
*Goes to continue writing Volcano*
Keep up the good work!
| Title: What Lurks In The Deep
| 08 Oct 2013 12:30 pm
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| Reviewer: mithrilandtj (Anonymous)
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Love the photo
BTW Why can't Albus send Fawkes for food? A phoenix can lift a lot of weight (canon), so why not have him raid a muggle grocery for bread & fruit with an expanded basket/bag? Or at least have Fawkes 'flame' people to the drier parts of the castle?
Ah! I don't know why, but I was beginning to think that the monster was actually good. Obviously, I was dreadfully wrong, since it's tried to drown Harry and choke Severus. :( Oh well, lol. Keep the chapters coming JA. Thanks for sharing your stories!
| Title: What Lurks In The Deep
| 08 Oct 2013 2:54 am
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| Reviewer: Fen impersonating HP (Anonymous)
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Update FoBD
...okay, I'm reading the chapter now, lol. Thanks for posting JA! XD
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