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Title: Chapter 10: Where do we go From Here? 22 Mar 2014 9:18 pm
Reviewer: Outlawgal (Signed) [Report This]
    yeah an update THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU
    Anyways: Why can't they see Dean and the first year on the map? They are still technically on the castle and the map shows part of the grounds too right?
    Poor Draco he needs someone there for him too Fred should have taken him along who cares about family rivalry. Harry will be that someone i'm sure. Ahh so much more I want to know.

    Author's Response:

    You're welcome, I love this story, It's a wild ride and everything goes! lol. 

     Because they were looking over the map quickly, and this point, focusing on getting the precious cargo on their backs to safety.  Fred should have taken him, there will be consequences for that of coourse, make no mistake that all is well with that front. I hope the next chapter helps a bit 

Title: Chapter 10: Where do we go From Here? 22 Mar 2014 5:59 pm
Reviewer: Kris (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I do wish that the Weasley boys had taken Draco with them. It is horrible that he was left at Hogwarts 'to wait' for his family to get him. There is no reason why he couldn't have been fetched from St. Mungos instead. Lucius and Arthur would just have to get over their idiotic feud for a few hours at most.

    Author's Response: I know, they should have taken him. He needed the comfort, but becase they didnt it reinforced something in him, and the consequences of those choses wont be known just yet, but it's coming. 
Title: Chapter 9: The Definition of Bravery 22 Nov 2013 1:32 am
Reviewer: mworth1019 (Signed) [Report This]
    nice.... scary

    Author's Response:

    Im glad you like it! 

Title: Chapter 9: The Definition of Bravery 20 Nov 2013 6:41 am
Reviewer: Gryffinclaw (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! Thank-you for finally giving us some resolution concerning Percy. I look forward to seeing where the story goes next.

    Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing...I look forward to having you along for the ride :)
Title: Chapter 9: The Definition of Bravery 20 Nov 2013 4:57 am
Reviewer: bianca (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh wow! Excellent chapter - all of the images of students hard pressed for survival.
    I hope you update again soon!

    Author's Response: I hoope your still reading! I'm trying to update at least once a month lol
Title: Chapter 9: The Definition of Bravery 19 Nov 2013 3:21 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Fantastic chapter! great how you are bringing the action together but of course so sad about the deaths but well handled thank you
Title: Chapter 9: The Definition of Bravery 19 Nov 2013 2:50 am
Reviewer: Outlawgal (Signed) [Report This]
    geeez poor Percy his life will never be the same but hey he is alive. Neville got out and he used his Gryffindor courage that he never thought he had. No not Seamus and the 7th year girl. Geez you killing students left and right
    Oh I laughed so hard when the first year told Sirius she had to pee. LOL what great timing.

    Author's Response:

    I know, his fate changed twice. There are so many Weaseleys and I felt killing off one that no one seemed to like wouldnt matter..but I couldnt do it .>.< i liked Percy in the last book fighting alongside his brothers. 

    But I only killed off 4(2 of whom most people dont even like!), there a few more but I dont think I'll go into much detail. I needed to show Seamus's death as it was his father who saw the disaster in the muggle world..again everything has to come full circle and its getting there. 

     It was huh? It seemed liked it fit, and I can just imagine the look on Sirius's face when she said it. :) 

Title: Chapter 8: We Believe in this Love 22 Oct 2013 12:56 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you for a great chapter you are really holding all the pieces together

    Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for being a faithful reader and reviewer, it means alot :)
Title: Chapter 8: We Believe in this Love 20 Oct 2013 9:00 pm
Reviewer: Biggi (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Please, please please, do not be so cruel! Please do not let Percy die! Please!

    I am looking forward to the next chapter. I hope, you will update soon.

    Best wishes and many thanks for this chapter!

    Author's Response:

    Cruel me? Psh...sacrifices are apart of life...*has a moment of clarity that she sounds like Dumbledore* Percy will live, his fate changed a few times, but one cannot type a story when she's sobbing over her keyboard lol, so he'll live and thats all I can give you.

     

    I will definitly try to update soon, if not  this week, then the first week of Novemeber, trying to be ontop of my stories as my muse is trying to start another one.

Title: Chapter 8: We Believe in this Love 20 Oct 2013 8:35 pm
Reviewer: Gryffinclaw (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay for chapter 8, can't wait for 9. Poor Percy; I really hope he makes it. Second yay! for Sirius catching Peter. All in all, good chapter; I can't wait until to see where the story goes from here.

    Author's Response: I'm glad you like it, and I'm glad you reviewed thats awesome :) This story has sooo many possibilities...

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