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| 24 Feb 2014 12:44 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Great chapter thank you it seems to be working out but I do love the angst!
Looking forward to more, please update again soon!
| Title: The essay
| 23 Feb 2014 5:53 pm
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| Reviewer: Mary (Anonymous)
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Nice Chapter ! So glad that Ian told his father. I am looking forward to the next chapter. I am sure what you have written for the next chapter is as well written and thought out as the rest of this story has been. Don't scrap it.
| Title: The essay
| 23 Feb 2014 6:39 am
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| Reviewer: projectjay (Anonymous)
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Loved it hopefully Harry will believe severus
| Title: The essay
| 23 Feb 2014 1:04 am
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| Reviewer: Kendra Dhyanna (Anonymous)
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Wow!!!
Al fin Severus tiene una idea medio productiva para poner las cosa en orden con Harry
además de que amo la idea de que planteas un nuevo verano con los tres
porque en realidad espero una vinculación entre hermanos
en fin buen capítulo
Good for Ian. I was hoping that he would start to get along with his brother. Standing up for Harry and letting Severus know what Harry was thinking was the best thing that could have happened. Hopefully, they can work together to get through to Harry and be a real family.
Oh just give me that Harry's fears about the trial influenced Ian. That speaks of deep and intense feelings that are Harry. I liked the scene, soft, warm and I think Snape began to see the light, at least to get out of this mess. Harry has many reasons to be angry, but it is only a child and would like to see him happy. I'm dying of curiosity to know what will make Snape. Please calmly checked his writing, sometimes we feel bad because we are insecure and it's actually pretty good. Writing is hard work, but you do it very very well.
Short as it was , it was a great place to end off the chapter! Can't wait for next chapter.
Omg! I am so glad that Ian told Snape the truth and that he is going to try to assure Harry that he won't abandon him.
I hope that Snape can get through to Harry though.
Great job. Can't wait for the next update.
| Title: The essay
| 22 Feb 2014 3:07 pm
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| Reviewer: Kickthemoon (Anonymous)
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Still great! Looking forward to the behemoth of the next chapter :)
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