| Title: The honorable witch
| 16 Dec 2013 3:41 pm
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| Reviewer: Mary (Signed)
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I enjoyed the chapter (as always). I hope that Lupin follows through with talking to Harry about Lily.
| Title: Study aid
| 13 Dec 2013 8:02 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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I like how you are handling their relationship it seems very realistic. Thank you
| Title: The honorable witch
| 13 Dec 2013 7:53 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Loved their conversation but I do miss the angst of them not getting on!
Hmmm...this is getting very interesting. So, brothers are starting to get closer, hopefully Snape will be next.
I hope that Harry gets his broom back, and it's interesting that Ian is on Harry's side in this.
I love that Harry and Ian are starting to find some common ground! Sibling relationships are tough but I think that it would be easier to make amends with a distant brother than a father. Still loving this story
I really like how you explored the complex emotions Harry would have regarding his mother. I think it feels very realistic.
2 chapters in one night !!! thank you,you're fuck*ng awesome. I really appreciate this chapters. Snape tells more about Lily and Harry and Ian are becoming friends.I find Snape appears more human however he is not becoming OOC.Bravo! what you're doing with this story is really great. i'm already waiting for the next chapter.
I'm glad to see them starting to get along. With the Firebolt incident, they clearly had something in common and that is as good a place to start as any. I was surprised to hear Ian say that his dad sucks at teaching though. He must really be warming up to Harry to admit that.
Awwww!!!
Se que yo soy una de las defensoras más vehementes de que Ian es un mocoso petulante que se merece una o dos buenas experiencias que le bajen los humos, pero sin embargo me encanto esta escena en verdad se deja ver como un niño, sabes como alguien mucho más joven y es muy dulce verlo tratando de ganar la aprobación de su hermano mayor,
sin duda voy a ¡awwwwwwwwwww! si hay una escena de Harry protegiendo a su hermanito en algun lugar de los siete años de Hogwarts
En fin.......... me encanto el primer intento de vinculación entre los hermanos
Me emociona mucho la doble actualización,
yupi!!!!!!!!!
Buen capítulo sin duda es impresionante como Harry va a construir que Lily no es una buena persona, y realmente me gusta la idea de que se de cuenta no solo de que Lily no es perfecta sino que más bien estaba por mucho tiempo tirando así el lado incorrecto de las personas
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