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Title: Christmas 19 Nov 2013 4:05 pm
Reviewer: Worth it (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This was definitely worth the wait!
Title: Christmas 19 Nov 2013 3:38 pm
Reviewer: ImUpToNoGood (Signed) [Report This]
    This is a mervellous chapter. The reactions are so true to the characters. I hope Harry gets back to the rest of his presents... I think Snape's feelings would be hurt if Harry did not even open it, and with Snape, hurt feelings often manifest as anger.

    I loved seeing more of the context behind the visitations (Lily and James). Poor Severus, that he gets James instead of Lily. But they are right, Harry needs Lily more.

    It was great seeing Severus start to develop a bit of empathy toward Harry, (correctly) imagining Harry's past Christmases... Although, the Firebolt may throw all of that out of whack.

    I fear for a one step forward two steps back scenario, but hope Snape holds onto his new understanding, despite appparent evidence to the contrary.

    Lovely story. I always look forward to new updates! Thanks for writing this!

    K
Title: Christmas 19 Nov 2013 3:12 pm
Reviewer: quickster (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I'm happy that Snape is finally really thinking about Harry. I like the scene between severus and Ian.
Title: Christmas 19 Nov 2013 2:59 pm
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I hope that the broom is not a gift from Snape.
Title: Christmas 19 Nov 2013 2:25 pm
Reviewer: lillie (Anonymous) [Report This]
    great!
Title: Christmas 19 Nov 2013 1:18 pm
Reviewer: Eclipse (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hey, i realy realy do love your story but it would be great if snape and ian to start grovelling and change their attitude. But hey great job with the story, im always waiting.
Title: Christmas 19 Nov 2013 10:06 am
Reviewer: Alexander (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Beautiful!
Title: Christmas 19 Nov 2013 9:47 am
Reviewer: gin (Anonymous) [Report This]
    ian looks like dudley. he is very selfish child. other hand Harry is poor child.

    James and lupin are legend :)
Title: Days before Christmas 19 Nov 2013 7:33 am
Reviewer: Hey... (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Is everything alright? I know you have been in the habit of updating every weekend. It is not like you to skip. I just wanted to check on you...

    Btw I love this story. It is definitely one of my favorites.
Title: Days before Christmas 15 Nov 2013 10:02 pm
Reviewer: Kaelisea (Anonymous) [Report This]
    First off I love your fic. Now.....okay well, personally as an example, my own mom doesn't communicate with me well. If we fight we don't apologize all the time with words sometimes we do.things for each other instead, i'll cook.& Mom will buy me a small gift like socks. Christmas is a time to say many things on the form of one act. I'm for Snape buying the broom. It's a good way for him to heal a great deal of damage & despite misgivings, I think to Harry a broom has a significance of freedom & encouragement. I'd like to see Snape discover Harry's cooking talent. Myself somehow.

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