I hope that Ian's attitude improves, I really do.
Hope that they can someday be a family.
I hope that Ian's attitude improves, I really do.
Hope that they can someday be a family.
| Title: A fire-call from Mrs. Figg
| 16 Nov 2014 2:30 am
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| Reviewer: Pandora (Signed)
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OH, I just knew that Ian had locked Harry down there, the little brat.
Now maybe Snape will finally see that his impressions of Harry are wrong.
| Title: An iron cylinder on wheels
| 16 Nov 2014 2:22 am
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Poor Harry. It doesn't end, does it?
I'm loving this story, despite Snape being an ass. lol but then again, that is the true Canon Snape, so you are doing a perfect job keeping him in character.
| Title: Pushed out of the nest
| 16 Nov 2014 1:41 am
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| Reviewer: Pandora (Signed)
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oh my God. Poor Harry.
This is so horrible.
HOpe Snape finally figures out that Harry is not the spoilt brat that he thinks.
| Title: Consequences of running away
| 16 Nov 2014 1:27 am
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| Reviewer: Pandora (Signed)
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Omg!
What horrible people!!!
I do hope that Snape finally takes him in after this and softens a bit.
Oh Snape you are in such denial!!!
Now to see what happens from here.
OMg. Poor Harry. Snape is really cruel in this story, but then again, you have kept him in perfect character. Good job!
Cannot wait to see what comes next.
Snape did a good job explaining to Harry why he was punishing him rather than just doing it. Since the Dursleys were just plain abusive with punishments, Harry doesn't understand that there is an actual reason for Snape grounding him beyond being mean. I enjoyed Harry's 'poor me' 'stupid Snape' attitude, too. Hopefully the discussion will sink in for him sometime over the next 9 weekends of grounding.
Mmmm
creo que entiendo tu intención con la percepción de Harry sobre el castigo,
sin embargo, creo que fue demasiado puchero y alboroto,
al fin y al cabo,
el Harry de tu historia si bien emocional es mucho más hastiado en relación con los adultos
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