I must say I was really surprised that Harry wrote Snape. I would expect him to write Dumbledore or even McGonagall.
The Dursleys really crossed the line here! They are so pathetic. You pictured it wonderfuly when they even wouldnt sacrifice enough money for three hamburgers.
Nicely written, by the way.
Ha! We all knew it. How thick can you get, Snape? Snap out of it!
Wonderful story, I like it very much.
Oh, a time skip? Like whole summer? At least I won’t have to frown over the Dursleys :)
Aw, poor Harry. My heart is bleeding for him.
Stupid Dumbledore - investigating Snape’s love affairs before the eyes of a journalist and (worse) eleven years old Harry.
Nice chapter!
What an interesting beginning! Well done!
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| 28 Oct 2013 7:27 pm
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| Reviewer: Kaelisea (Anonymous)
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I love this story! Please keep it up! I feel like although the gift seems like the professor gave it. I feel like ian did it, & maybe snape added the card.
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| 28 Oct 2013 8:58 am
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| 28 Oct 2013 5:37 am
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| Reviewer: Kendra (Anonymous)
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Bueno, sin duda no fue un capítulo aburrido por el contrario fue bastante bueno
Mmm Yo diría que la baraja de Snap es de Ian o Cecil, es demasiado infantil de un regalo para no ser de un niño
Me encanto la conversación con Lupin, en realidad no puedo esperar a que el pedacito de información acerca de lo que Harry ve cuando un dementor se acerca llegue a Snape, promete ser impresionante!!!!
Por otro lado me encanta la negativa de Harry de creer en el cambio de Snape, más cuando lo pones en perspectiva es decir, hace dos años lo hubiese creído y abrazado la posibilidad sin duda pero ahora............ no la desconfianza siempre allí
me encanta!!!!
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