| Title: Do you know why you are being punished?
| 14 Nov 2014 9:44 pm
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| Reviewer: Sirena (Signed)
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I really enjoy this story. I think you got what you wanted with this chapter, cos one being punished is more angry with punisher then punishment itself ;) or it just seems like that since it is easier to be angry with something material not with concept ;)
Your lecture was good too... I am getting really put out with though I will need to get better with things like that if I get kids... lectures are hard!
| Title: Do you know why you are being punished?
| 14 Nov 2014 6:47 pm
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| Reviewer: BlueWater5 (Signed)
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i agree with snape punishment. but i think that malfoy should be grounded to snape quarters as well. that would be a good punishment for them both. they would have to get along with each other for nine weekends.
Wow! Great story, great character portrayal and depth of emotions, and fantastic writing! I can't wait for more.
| Title: A fire-call from Madam Pomfrey
| 03 Nov 2014 12:19 pm
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| Reviewer: atiaahmed (Signed)
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Hey, I really like your story! started reading it even though I don't read WIP normally, but this is very nice. I like the slow pace with Harry and Snape, even though I would like to know more about the way the Dursleys treated Harry. And Ian is an interesting piece of the puzzle, even though as a character he annoys me quite a lot - spoilt little brat :P
| Title: A fire-call from Madam Pomfrey
| 19 Sep 2014 2:01 am
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| Reviewer: Aqua Mage (Signed)
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| Title: A fire-call from Madam Pomfrey
| 09 Sep 2014 7:41 pm
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| Reviewer: Buchling (Anonymous)
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Oh come on now, extra punishment for being atacked? Someone should set Snape straight soon. He really must start to ask himself why Harry did those things. Also he must have some inklink what it meant for Harry to give up his cloak. If he cannot handle Harry without jumping to conclusions all the time and acting out of prejudice he should not claim parental rights.
| Title: A fire-call from Madam Pomfrey
| 09 Sep 2014 3:15 pm
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| Reviewer: rosina (Signed)
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I liked the chapter. Snape seems to be acting somewhat more like a parent to Harry now, even if they haven't quite got to a close relationship yet. Maybe the weekends together will help Harry sort out his feelings. Hope Ian realised that Harry didn't mean to hit him.
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