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Title: Of Barks and Bites 29 Sep 2013 4:30 am
Reviewer: Kendra (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Interesante casa para Ian y que lo separaras de su amigo a un más, interesante decisión,,,


    me gustan los detalles, y aprecio en verdad la actitud de McGanigall, es sin duda muy bien pensada,

    fascinante capítulo el que has descrito aquí, varias cosas que apreciar en el cuadro general,

    si mi memoria no me falla (ya que no quiero revisar el libro) el siguiente incidente interesante debe ser la clase contra el boggart,

    espero con interes tu actualización
Title: Of Barks and Bites 28 Sep 2013 11:17 pm
Reviewer: TATIS (Signed) [Report This]
    I still think Snape is a bastard
Title: Of Barks and Bites 28 Sep 2013 11:15 pm
Reviewer: Phoenix1 (Signed) [Report This]
    I wish Snape would pull his head out of his behind and see Harry for himself!
Title: Of Barks and Bites 28 Sep 2013 10:20 pm
Reviewer: Anthezar (Signed) [Report This]
    So, how many times is this now that I just wanna grab that man and shake him so hard that his brain rattles into the correct position? 10th maybe? Perhaps I'm exaggerating, haha. Lovely story, bytheway. Enjoying it very much so. Dear Severus, though, needs a good swift kick to the pants. But, oh my gosh, I loved the statement that his bark is worse than his bite. That was so adorable. I hope Sev will start to come to his senses soon. I bet something scary will happen and he'll think to have that special heart failure reserved for parents for his first born. Haha! Keep up the excellent work!
Title: Of Barks and Bites 28 Sep 2013 9:42 pm
Reviewer: JAWorley (Signed) [Report This]
    Did Snape give him back his broom already? I didn't remember reading that in the last chapter? Was that last scene in a classroom or the hallway? I got the impression it was in McGonagall's classroom and that Snape was somehow just standing in a dark corner though it makes more sense if it was in the hallway.

    Loving this story and I'm glad Ian is in Ravenclaw!

    Author's Response:

    I didn't write a scene where Snape gave Harry the broom back, just tried to kind of hint that he did. And as you might have noticed in this chapter, I did say that Snape had in fact given it back to Harry. 

     Harry talking to McGonagall was in the classroom, Snape was standing in the corridor outside. At least that how I immagined it, though it would be up to each reader personally to picture it as they please. More on that in the next chapter.

    Also, *fangirlsquek!* I love your stories!  

Title: Of Barks and Bites 28 Sep 2013 9:01 pm
Reviewer: gin (Anonymous) [Report This]
    minerva is angel. im glad when she talk to with snape. snape must understand he have Harry too.
    i hope remus care about Harry and Harry act like remus is his father. snape must see he can loose Harry.
Title: Of Barks and Bites 28 Sep 2013 8:12 pm
Reviewer: YeCatsJ (Signed) [Report This]
    Good chapter and happy to see Ian have a bit of remorse if only a little. And Snape over hearing Harry was nice. Hopefully have him start to come around. Maybe during the quid ditch match with the dementors have sev finally have some parental feelings for Harry when he falls off hi s broom.
Title: Nimbus 2000 26 Sep 2013 4:15 am
Reviewer: projectjay (Anonymous) [Report This]
    What a poor summer, poor Harry having to do all the chores, live with the disdane of everyone in the house feel of abandonment by the only family he has left besides Snape whom could care less that Harry is his son. At least he got his broom back that was sweet of Cecil to help Ian with his chore of chopping wood, but I would of spanked his butt...
Title: Nimbus 2000 24 Sep 2013 12:59 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you. I notice the broom has not been returned!
Title: Nimbus 2000 23 Sep 2013 6:49 am
Reviewer: Kendra (Anonymous) [Report This]
    no puedo decir cuan emocionada estoy de que finalmente están en Hogwarts!!!

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