| Title: I hate him!
| 23 Sep 2013 5:18 am
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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Love your writing. Don't know why Ian is jealous of the attention Snape gives Harry. Almost all of it, from day one, has been unfair punishments and criticism. Most kid's can handle sharing attention with siblings. Ian has serious only child, spoiled brat syndrome going on. But I know you will resolve it eventually and the slow pace surely keeps things angsty. Thanks for sharing.
| Title: Nimbus 2000
| 22 Sep 2013 7:52 am
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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Hope your mom is doing better. Love your story! Best wishes...
| Title: What Cecil said
| 22 Sep 2013 3:29 am
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| Reviewer: projectjay (Anonymous)
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He doesn't have to instantly become nice but stop treating the boy like a leaper. He has been abused, missed used etc his whole life. Ian needs to have a little of Snapes' punishment.
| Title: Nimbus 2000
| 22 Sep 2013 2:55 am
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| Reviewer: Ecl1ps3 (Anonymous)
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Hey thanks for updating.... Ahh please make snape grovel soon....
Please Update soon!!!
| Title: Nimbus 2000
| 22 Sep 2013 1:51 am
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| Reviewer: bere (Anonymous)
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this fiction is great.thank you !
| Title: Nimbus 2000
| 22 Sep 2013 1:06 am
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| Reviewer: yey (Anonymous)
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i love love love this!!!! i cannot wait till sirius and lupin come to harry's life. at least he will have two father figures while snape is brooding! please make snape jealous of harry's relationship with sirius. i want to see his reaction when his own son is closer to his sworn enemies more than him. i cannot wait to see that!! keep it up:)
| Title: Nimbus 2000
| 21 Sep 2013 8:52 pm
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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Good story. Snape still only sees Harry as as having two skills trouble making and quidditch. Lilly keeps asking Harry to be patient but he is being mistreated and he is the child here. Snape seems to be progressing at a snail's pace. I really hope Harry finds someone else who will welcome and love him. Snape and Ian do not like or want him and certainly do not deserve him. Their observational skills are nonexistent. They have such low opinions of Harry... I am so glad he is back at Hogwarts. Too bad Snape did nothing for Harry's calloused blistered hands... please keep writing... I can't wait for more.
really good chapter!.. cant wait for the next one!!
| Title: Nimbus 2000
| 21 Sep 2013 4:45 pm
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| Reviewer: gin (Anonymous)
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sirius black is coming:) i hope he care about Harry.i really want snape will see how Harry love sirius like sirius his father.
i still dont like ian. and i really hate snape.
now they going hogwarts. im worried how snape will close to Harry and begin understand him.
Good chapter, but wish there was more . I'm sad that Snape still calls Harry ", potter". How can Ian be accepted to start warming up to Harry when it's obvious Snape still detests Harry. Hmmm, wonder if Sirius showing up will be a good thing or not. If Sirius rejects Harry for being a Snape biological and Snape is still rejecting Harry then it'll be devastating for Harry. I was kinda wishing that Snape had come around a bit more before they returned to school.
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