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Title: I hate him! 15 Sep 2013 8:32 pm
Reviewer: Kendra (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Supongo que Ian no es realmente malo, pero ya debe comenzar a perfil realmente su personalidad, es decir, todos sabemos que Draco Malfoy era un niño mimado y egoísta hasta que la guerra y la amenaza de perder a su familia a cambio de convertirse en un asesino le dio el impulso que necesitaba para cambiar, pero realmente espero que eso no tenga que pasarle a Ian.

    Me encanto la escena con Lily, es decir, realmente Severus va a empezar a perder a su hijo sin siquiera tenerlo, sino se aplica a lo que esta haciendo con el niño.

    Supongo que tendrán que esperar a que llegue el inicio de Hogwarts para que realmente puedan a avanzar en algo en su relación, lo de tener un asesino persiguiéndolo y estando tan cerca de Harry, debe generar suficientes oportunidades de cuidado entre ellos.

    Gran capítulo!!!!!!!!!!!
Title: I hate him! 15 Sep 2013 7:54 pm
Reviewer: 1woof1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I hope more revelations will come soon, between Harry and Snape.
Title: What Cecil said 14 Sep 2013 12:05 am
Reviewer: Victoire (Signed) [Report This]
    Lovin' this story. Wantin' more of it.

    Wait, this is not a proper comment. I guess so. Well... Okay, I am amazed by this story. It's nice how you put it, how you created Ian's character and stuff. However, I think that Harry asked Severus for help too easily, and I lacked the mandatory talk of Severus with Dumbledore about "what I am supposed to do with this boy".
    I am also amazed Harry didn't run away yet, with this treatment... Maybe he's just too dull to think about that, with this dumping and stuff.

    Waitin' for continuation anyway.
Title: What Cecil said 13 Sep 2013 6:53 pm
Reviewer: Lilyflower5 (Signed) [Report This]
    will Ian accept harry as a brother eventually
Title: What Cecil said 13 Sep 2013 5:57 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter and a good way to get Severus to see the truth.
    I do hope your mother is making good progress.
Title: What Cecil said 13 Sep 2013 7:56 am
Reviewer: JAWorley (Signed) [Report This]
    Can't wait to see how Snape will handle this!!!!
Title: What Cecil said 11 Sep 2013 3:46 am
Reviewer: Karis (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Finally! Snape really needed this reality check.
Title: What Cecil said 10 Sep 2013 11:00 pm
Reviewer: mnfm (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I've been waiting for the light to go to Snape's head for sometime now.
    You say that Snape will not immediately start being nice to Harry, well I hope Harry does not accept Snape and his lying son for a long, long, long time. That would take the energy out of your wonderful story.
    Then again, is your story and I'll read it anyway!
Title: What Cecil said 10 Sep 2013 6:43 am
Reviewer: Kendra (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Espero que tu mamá este mucho mejor.

    Gracias por actualizar de nuevo!!! Y el capítulo fue simplemente genial. Me encanto cada detalle en él.

    Es decir, al fin Severus va a comenzar a pensar, a analizar las cosas que esta viendo, al fin va a comenzar a entender, aunque se que no se ira amoroso inmediatamente si comenzará a ver realmente a Harry

    Además amo el hecho de que sea James el que le haga ver las cosas como son y no Lily, sino que sea un hombre que amo a Harry como su hijo el que lo obligue a ser razonable

    Por otro lado me intriga lo que suceda con el Patronus de Harry.....

    Igual, gracias por actualizar,fue un gran capítulo
Title: What Cecil said 10 Sep 2013 6:02 am
Reviewer: 1woof1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I'm glad to see a turning point. I look forward to the next chapter!

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