| Title: Cecil Dotrice
| 30 Aug 2013 12:27 am
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| Reviewer: natalie (Anonymous)
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Harry must escape snape' house. really. they worst than dursleys. snape not only horrible, he is not normal.harry is his own, but he doesnt care about harry.
harry injured. im suprise how doesnt still he ill.
finally ian.i hope he is squib. i never sympathy for him.
| Title: Cecil Dotrice
| 30 Aug 2013 12:11 am
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| Reviewer: gin (Anonymous)
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snape is very heartless. i really cant believe he cant understand what reaaly happen yet.
i hope Harry will not forgive him.
ian is spoiled, stupid child.i dont think i begin like ian. he is horrible.
i hope ian will trouble and going punish because of his friend.
| Title: Cecil Dotrice
| 30 Aug 2013 12:06 am
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| Reviewer: Yondi (Signed)
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I feel the same way as "bridgeportfox". If I would be stuck in Harry's situation I think I would try to get away now matter the costs.
What they do to him is just plain aweful.
I'm glad to hear that Snape will finally find out what is happening. If I were Harry, I would be tempted to run away for real just to get away. Ian really needs some kind of comeuppance. Maybe one of his pranks will go wrong and he will get caught in the middle by his dad or rescued by Harry?
| Title: Cecil Dotrice
| 29 Aug 2013 10:51 pm
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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Snape is blind and stupid. He has spoiled brat Iana. Ian is terrible. I'm very interested how Snape react when understand their mistakes.
Punishment is ridiculous. How can give child axe? I understand that break his skin but can to hit. And how can you tell a child that if he hurt it you do not care? Harry gets hurt it get? Ill? Maybe this would halt Snape and it triggered minimal protectiveness.
Please continue writing.
| Title: Diagon Alley
| 29 Aug 2013 7:52 am
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| Reviewer: Sally (Anonymous)
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I LOVE this story. It might be satisfying to have Snape hear his own bullying demeaning words being said by Ian to Harry - especially when he knows how false and cruel the words are. I liked the idea (someone else had before) - about Harry helping to save Ian in some way - (Harry has that saving person thing.) It would be nice for Harry to be rescued/kidnapped by his (fairy) God-Father (Serius.) And have Snape recognize what he has lost and be frantic with worry. And/or have him frantic because Harry is injured badly and still believes all of his family hate him. Just some ideas but keep doing what you are ding because it is great! THANKS FOR YOUR STORY.
| Title: Diagon Alley
| 28 Aug 2013 5:10 am
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| Reviewer: katrina (Anonymous)
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i really dont like snape and yet youve captured his character really well. i hope that a sort of father figure shows up there for harry that will make snape jealous when he realizes what hes done to harry.
| Title: Diagon Alley
| 28 Aug 2013 1:56 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Wonderful scene and very funny. I found the scene with the bricks very poignant poor Harry!
| Title: Explain Potter!
| 27 Aug 2013 9:03 pm
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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Did Severus notice Harry's thinness when he had him take off his shirt? Will he ever know how Harry is really treated at home? Will see how badly he and Ian treat Harry? Love your story very much. THANKS for writing.
| Title: Diagon Alley
| 27 Aug 2013 7:39 am
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| Reviewer: Kendra (Anonymous)
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Fascinante, me encanta la interacción entre Severus y Harry, aunque me pregunto si Severus tendrá que esperar hasta ver a Harry ser casi besado por un dementor para sacar su cabeza de un agujero y realmente empezar a construir una relación,
sin embargo fue un gran capítulo, sobre todo el detalle de las boveda y el helado
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