| Title: Diagon Alley
| 26 Aug 2013 8:41 pm
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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Good afternoon;
I loved this chapter.
Please do not forgive Harry Snape soon.
Prefer that Harry did not feel anything.
Neither hatred nor affection, nothing.
Snape must be desperate for forgiveness for his son
Actually Harry must be strong and independent.
I like that way too little and way too late
| Title: Diagon Alley
| 26 Aug 2013 7:28 pm
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| Reviewer: gin (Anonymous)
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when can snape begin undertand Harry? i really hate snape. he is selfish and heartless.
ian is stupid, spoiled child.
poor Harry.
| Title: Diagon Alley
| 26 Aug 2013 1:48 pm
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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Sad that normal for Harry is to expect not to get a treat from his family. Hope Snape eventually notices all Harry's chores and their improvements to their house (the yard, the basement, etc. I suppose Harry will instinctively store his new purchases in the closet under the stairs - seeing as he has no other space of his own. Great chapter! Can't wait for more.
| Title: Diagon Alley
| 26 Aug 2013 1:04 pm
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| Reviewer: Alexander (Anonymous)
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I'm so in love with this story
| Title: Diagon Alley
| 26 Aug 2013 2:24 am
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| Reviewer: ravenpuff (Anonymous)
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It's heartbreaking that Harry tries so hard with nothing in return from Snape or Ian. I feel like even Snape knows he's being unfair at this point. The rebuke in the ice cream shop was ridiculous. Either he must realize that, or his anger and bitterness is even more blinding than usual. This story is such a joy to read--please update soon!
| Title: Diagon Alley
| 26 Aug 2013 1:35 am
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| Reviewer: Ecl1ps3 (Anonymous)
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Aghh, you keep me in suspend TT_TT
Sev and ian is soooo evil!
Harry dont easily forgive them, make them beg!!
Great chapter as always, im always surprise and happy to see your story!
| Title: A curious little boy
| 26 Aug 2013 12:49 am
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| Reviewer: Larisya (Anonymous)
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I do feel rather bad for Harry... I hope there is more of his PoV....
Poor Harry. He doesn't seem to be getting anywhere with the Snapes. Seeing all the money Harry had in his vault probably didn't help matters either.
| Title: Diagon Alley
| 26 Aug 2013 12:04 am
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| Reviewer: kari (Anonymous)
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This story always makes me angry. Snape and Ian are indescribable. Snape hate James because was spoiled brat and his son is even worse!
Otherwise I don't understand - Snape think that he has law forbid Quiditch Harry because he is guardian but at all not treated Harry as ward.
Snape and Ian are angry because Harry is rich? This is sick. Is Snape adult? Or jealous kid? And Harry is treated how the air. Situation with ice cream - no words. All day Snape treatde Harry if he had bothered and then is startled. Snape did not say Harry that may choose ice cream.
Please let lifes Harry change because this is very sad that Harry there is nothing positive. You wrote that will happy end and I'm glad. But with every new chapter I begin to have doubts that Harry might be lucky with them.
Even if Snape finally understand I think that Harry never forgot pain and to rejection.
Please continue writing.
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