| Title: Explain Potter!
| 13 Aug 2013 11:00 pm
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| Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous)
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Hi again. I reviewed and gave name suggestions before. I was thinking you might want to stick with your current name for now so your readers recognize it. Plus I kinda like it. Anyway - whatever you decide will be fine. Thank you again for your story.
| Title: Explain Potter!
| 13 Aug 2013 10:04 pm
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| Reviewer: gin (Anonymous)
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what a stupid snape. he still doesnt understand. poor Harry. i hope he will not forgive snape easily.
story names : heartless father, harry' horrible family :)
| Title: Explain Potter!
| 13 Aug 2013 9:53 pm
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| Reviewer: M (Anonymous)
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I think that you should leave the name as it is. Whenever I see this story in recent, it makes me smile because it’s all like “Surprise!!! I’m updated!!!”. Plus I can totally see Harry getting angry/irritated at Snape when he finds out that he was abused and saying “Surprise! Not the spoiled brat you thought I was, am I?” or something like that. Or maybe that’s just me being spiteful towards Snape and wanting him to feel really guilty for being such a jerk to Harry while he cares for his younger son Ian. Anyways, love the story and can’t wait to read what happens next, keep up the good work!
| Title: Explain Potter!
| 13 Aug 2013 9:48 pm
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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Thanks for quick update. Snape was so close to figuring it out! Can't wait to see what happens next.
| Title: Explain Potter!
| 13 Aug 2013 9:42 pm
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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Please Harry is not a weak guy.
The you should try to fix things must be Snape.
I would love to not forgive Harry.
And Harry did not feel bad about not forgive.
I love it when he's strong.
| Title: Explain Potter!
| 13 Aug 2013 6:00 pm
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| Reviewer: Moonstar (Anonymous)
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I love this story, It makes my day when it's updated, I'm realy interested in where this story will go!
Not got any good title ideas realy. I almost wrote a story called "rules for a quiet life" as in - not asking questions is the first rule for a quiet life with the dursleys, you can have that title if you want it. I don't think it fits my story anymore anyway! Can't wait for the next chapter!!
| Title: Explain Potter!
| 13 Aug 2013 5:19 pm
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| Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous)
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Another good chapter. I do hope Snape does eventually uncover the truth of Harry's treatment at the hands of his relatives. The boy lived in a cupboard for 11 years for goodness sake. Also hope he recognizes he and his son's horrible treat of the boy for what it is. I hope he feels properly guilty and ashamed. He has a wonderful child in Harry. He doesn't see him for who he is and he does not deserve him. Feel really bad for Harry - He must feel so completely unwanted.
Name ideas: Forsaken, Deserted, Abandoned, Left Behind, Lost - all come to mind.
Thank you for sharing!
| Title: A fire-call from Mrs. Figg
| 12 Aug 2013 11:16 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very well done! The scene at the house was very vivid as was Harry's distress thank you
| Title: A fire-call from Mrs. Figg
| 11 Aug 2013 9:46 pm
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| Reviewer: mrs.doom (Anonymous)
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Please continue to update, too many good stories like this one just never finish.
| Title: A fire-call from Mrs. Figg
| 11 Aug 2013 2:18 am
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| Reviewer: rusulka7 (Anonymous)
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poor Harry, Please, please, let Snape begin to see how skewed his judgements are! Ian obviously has a bit to answer for, a shame he couldn't make his own mind about Harry but not surprising really.
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