| Title: An iron cylinder on wheels
| 05 Aug 2013 8:16 am
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| Reviewer: ecl1ps3 (Anonymous)
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My goodness so fast on updates you are making my day awesome!!
Well I guess I dont mind that you will make the story the usua harry abuse-snape findout- become kind to harry suddenly.
But i DO want snape to at least remorseful of his action and Ian too.
Then It will be great to see how they
build their relationship afterwards.
Also please if u can dont make harry too kind by forgiving snape outright..
I mean he(snape) deserve to do some grovelling.. I think..
Anyway great job, you are a good writer and love the story!
Will be waiting for the next chapter soon.
I don't do good with angst...usually I wait until the good part comes and then read everything in one go. That way, I know things will work out and when...sigh...poor Harry
| Title: An iron cylinder on wheels
| 05 Aug 2013 5:38 am
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| Reviewer: TATIS (Signed)
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Snape is a bastard.
I hope Harry NOT forgive.
Always put Harry forgiving easily.
Harry's fault that Lily is an idiot.
Harry's fault that James be a bully.
Harry is not to blame for Snape to be a stubborn and bitter bastard.
Harry's not his fault that his brother is a brat jealous and stupid.
Snape is really a bully.
| Title: An iron cylinder on wheels
| 05 Aug 2013 4:45 am
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| Reviewer: lynda (Anonymous)
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i have to say im in love with this story. You take on Snape, whilst being horrific is also in character. i would love for snape and Ian to push harry even further away so when the truth about Harry's home life is discovered they both have to earn harrys forgiveness and trush
| Title: An iron cylinder on wheels
| 05 Aug 2013 1:07 am
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| Reviewer: gin (Anonymous)
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i really sorry for Harry. snape not different to dursleys. actually snape worst than them. how can snape heartless. snape act like Harry is garbage. other hand ian. he never worry about Harry.
now im looking forward to how Harry act when he learn true about snape and ian than when snape begin understand Harry and love Harry.
| Title: An iron cylinder on wheels
| 05 Aug 2013 12:24 am
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| Reviewer: Paccia (Anonymous)
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300 Chocolate Frogs.
What a great chapter!
| Title: That night Snape dreamt
| 31 Jul 2013 2:28 am
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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My favorite moment in any angst story is the moment Snape realuzes how wrong he is about Harry - no clue why - just always love it. Your build up has been so awesome - LOVE IT and as always I am eagerly awaiting more!
can you pretty please have them become a proper careing family and snape find out about how harry is realy treated
| Title: That night Snape dreamt
| 31 Jul 2013 12:59 am
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| Reviewer: ravenpuff (Anonymous)
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I so wish Snape would see past his hatred and bitterness and just see Harry. My heart just aches for Harry. As frustrating as Snape is right now, you have done a beautiful job writing his character. He's not the type of man to just suddenly change his ways, and you have captured that.
| Title: That night Snape dreamt
| 30 Jul 2013 3:51 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Liked this chapter and would love to have Harry's take on it. I still think Severus should be made aware of the condition of Harry's back and general state, but still feel angry with him.
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