| Title: A spare bit of parchment
| 18 Jul 2014 2:58 pm
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| Reviewer: Sissi (Signed)
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Hi!
Even though it was short I loved this chapter. It makes us see the difference between having a parent who cares and not having anyone. I hope Snape's gonna explain to Harry how things are gonna work because it's obvious that he doesn't understand!
Please update soon:)
Silvia
P.S.
I am not a native speaker so please excuse my mistakes:)
| Title: A spare bit of parchment
| 18 Jul 2014 6:27 am
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| Reviewer: Kendra Dhyanna (Anonymous)
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Extremadamente corto!!!!
Muy corto en realidad.
Aunque esta genial!!! Me encanto, sin duda es muy bueno............ que haya revelado el secreto del mapa, que al fin reconozca que quiere a Severus como su papá
Solo espero que Severus pueda hacer que Harry le diga algo, y que el ojiverde se abra un poco con su padre
en fin..
gran capítulo
aunque espero que el próximo sea más largo
| Title: A spare bit of parchment
| 18 Jul 2014 4:06 am
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| Reviewer: BlueWater5 (Anonymous)
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I loved your version of Snape finding the Marauder's map.
| Title: A spare bit of parchment
| 17 Jul 2014 9:07 pm
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| Reviewer: Res (Anonymous)
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One of my favorite fanfics :) (oh, and it's "disappoint" ;) )
| Title: The Snotrag
| 15 Jul 2014 7:03 am
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| Reviewer: Reviewer (Anonymous)
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So glad to see this continuing - excited for more!
| Title: The Snotrag
| 11 Jul 2014 7:03 am
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| Reviewer: jolisgsd (Anonymous)
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Nice chapter!!!!!!!!!!!
You wrote about Harry's confusion about choosing friendship with Lupin or family very convincingly. Poor Harry! I wonder why Snape doesn't realize that Harry doesn't think really that there is any benefit to his being Snape's son. He has to obey him, yet he doesn't realize that Snape does care about him. In fact, he thinks deep down that Snape just wants him to be miserable. What angst!!!!
| Title: The Snotrag
| 11 Jul 2014 1:22 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Uh oh trouble ahead! Thank you a great chapter
| Title: About Professor Lupin
| 11 Jul 2014 1:09 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Lovely bit of angst much better when they are fighting!
| Title: The Snotrag
| 10 Jul 2014 2:55 pm
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| Reviewer: K (Anonymous)
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Looking forward to your next installment :)
Harry certainly is stubborn. Takes after his dad, I guess. It's going to be hard for them to get beyond this one. At least, Ian wasn't dragged into the middle of it. I like Ian. The scene where a tiny part of him is delighted that Harry and Snape aren't getting along, was really good. He is only human and manages to quash that selfish little voice.
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