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Title: Choices 31 May 2013 1:58 am
Reviewer: teriwright (Signed) [Report This]
    i can totally relate to harry at this point regarding the feeling nobody wants him and feeling like he isn't good enough or doesn't measure up to the snapes. I think he would have felt this way regardless of overhearing the elder snapes conversation. He has after all been trained to be invisible and unworthy. Add suicidal on to that and it would be a miracle if he felt welcome at the homey weasley's, let alone the austere snapes.

    tobias doesn't seem that welcoming either. He hasn't even asked to be called by his first name or *gasp* father. Has severus asked to be called anything other than sir or professor? i'll have to re-read the story again.

    I love stories where the characters are human with flaws and make mistakes but also learn from them as the story progresses.

    Anyhoo, i love the update speed and anxiously look forward to more.
Title: Choices 31 May 2013 1:31 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    The old saying about eavesdroppers hearing unfortunate things was certainly true in Harry's case. Too bad he only heard bits of the conversation and went with what he heard. At least the Snapes had wards up. No they just have to convince him that he really is wanted.
Title: Choices 30 May 2013 10:05 pm
Reviewer: Lilyflower5 (Signed) [Report This]
    well that was interesting I hope something can be done to have Alex get his true looks back
Title: Choices 30 May 2013 8:09 pm
Reviewer: Yondi (Signed) [Report This]
    Nice chapter :)

    Poor Harry though... although I can understand everyones reactions I steel think Tobias should be a little bite more careful about the way he behaves in front of Harry.

    At least Severus tries to make amends - one can see how much he cares about his lost little brother already :)

    Lily is... well, she annoys me. All that time she ignored Harry and now she starts to feel regret for her actions?
    bleh.

    Please continue as fast as you can :) I enjoy your story a lot!
Title: Talking with Sna-Severus 30 May 2013 6:10 am
Reviewer: Kendra (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Me encanto,

    El detalle de Severus defender a su hermano es grandioso pues muestra que el realmente le quiere,

    y me gusta que Harry comprenda que su familia biológica realmente lo amaba y por supuesto espero que pronto pueda conocer a sus padrinos y su padre

    Gracias por actualizar tan pronto
Title: Talking with Sna-Severus 30 May 2013 2:39 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm glad Harry agreed to talk to Severus before he left the hospital. It was a good neutral place for them to talk. I also enjoyed the scene of Snape awarding points to Harry for his 'good aim.'
Title: Talking with Sna-Severus 29 May 2013 11:32 pm
Reviewer: teriwright (Signed) [Report This]
    i look forward to reading where you take this story, in particular the reasons for harry's abduction. will he take another blood adoption potion to get his original looks back?
Title: Talking with Sna-Severus 29 May 2013 10:44 pm
Reviewer: 12reader (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Okay, this is heartbreaking but wonderful all at the same time, does that make sense? I hope things work out, you have me hooked, especially since the twins and Ginny are being supportive. About time someone took Pansy down a few pegs!

    I'm looking forward to an update!
Title: Talking with Sna-Severus 29 May 2013 8:19 pm
Reviewer: Outlawgal (Signed) [Report This]
    it was such a serious chapter until “Ten points to Gryffindor for good aim.”
    I am still laughing and it hard to type from all my shaking.
    Anyways, I am glad Harry and Sev talked. I have a feeling Harry will be joining that Snapes soon and getting resorted.
Title: Talking with Sna-Severus 29 May 2013 6:33 pm
Reviewer: -NightRise- (Signed) [Report This]
    woah love this story.... a nice change to what i've been reading

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