That was so good. In a terrible way I love that you made him homeless. Have you ever read A Little Princess by Frances Hodgson Burnett? It's one of my favorite books and this just seems really reminiscent of a couple of the scenes. Anyway this amazing so far, can't wait to keep reading!
Hard to read as in emotional, especially when his brother denied him and it was just sad, but good.
It was hard to read at times, but I loved it. just like i love all your stories :)
Author's Response: Hard to read? Hard to read because I wrote it badly, or hard to read becuase the content was emotional?
| Title: The Best Gift
| 19 Jan 2014 11:50 pm
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| Reviewer: kspence (Anonymous)
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Excellent story, good ending, I of course expected it to be longer, I guess just because it was so good.
| Title: Christmas
| 19 Jan 2014 10:46 pm
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| Reviewer: kspence (Anonymous)
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Story is really, really good.
great story! nicely crafted, you had me frustrated, teary and relieved! I admit to wondering how you could resolve all these issues by the time I got to chapter 8 but I think you have! The little overture from Calen was enough to give hope that things will turn out ok without being unbelievable. Good job!
| Title: The Best Gift
| 17 Jan 2014 1:29 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Great story and so much time and effort went into it thank you so much!
| Title: Falling Through
| 17 Jan 2014 12:59 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Wow the pace certainly was raised in this chapter great writing.
| Title: Christmas
| 17 Jan 2014 12:44 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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A very clever interesting chapter thank you
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