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Reviews For A Hogwart's Carol
Title: Epilogue 19 Jan 2014 12:09 am
Reviewer: Lea (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I've read the rest of your story and - I have to admit, that I'm dissapointed. Too sweet, too quick changes in way of acting. Too naive Harry.
    Good idea, but written without any look inside of psychological aspects of such difficult situation. Possibilities were many, but unfortunately you haven't exploit them...

    Author's Response:

    I have plans to expand on it in the future.

    The ending was rushed due to the deadline. 

    Coming from an abusive background I didn't want to pour too much of that into it. 

Title: Chapter 8 18 Jan 2014 9:11 pm
Reviewer: Lea (Anonymous) [Report This]
    so far, interesting and nicely written redaction of Dickens.
    I will read the rest with interest.

    Author's Response: Thank you.
Title: Epilogue 15 Jan 2014 8:40 pm
Reviewer: Twonky (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow! What a wonderful telling of A Christmas Carol. (Even better than the Muppets!)

    Author's Response:

    Thank you.

    I love Muppets Christmas Carol. 

Title: Epilogue 15 Jan 2014 4:02 pm
Reviewer: Anthezar (Signed) [Report This]
    This was so sweet! I loved it. I almost cried, too. So touching. I really liked the fact that Harry had a different wife than in canon. I thought that was brilliant. Nicely done!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you.

    I'm glade that you liked it. 

Title: Epilogue 14 Jan 2014 12:23 am
Reviewer: MsHuntergrl (Signed) [Report This]
    A fun twist to a classic Christmas story! Well done!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you.

    I saw a very early movie of 'A Christmas Carol' when I was a kid. The whole graveyard scene scared the living daylights out of me.

Title: Epilogue 13 Jan 2014 10:53 pm
Reviewer: rosina (Signed) [Report This]
    Lots of love for all. As it should be.

    Author's Response: Thank you. Thatá what I was aiming for.
Title: Chapter 10 13 Jan 2014 10:39 pm
Reviewer: rosina (Signed) [Report This]
    Ahh, sweet. Severus has really gone for it, and Harry is so polite and thoughtful. And if Voldy is going to be eliminated hopefully there'll be a happy ever after!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you Rosina.

     

Title: Chapter 9 13 Jan 2014 10:28 pm
Reviewer: rosina (Signed) [Report This]
    Yes! He's seen the light. Cute elves.

    Author's Response: Eleves are under estimated. They know more about what's going on in the wizarding world than most.
Title: Chapter 8 13 Jan 2014 10:23 pm
Reviewer: rosina (Signed) [Report This]
    That's a depressing future, and if that lot doesn't get Snape thinking nothing will.

    Author's Response: It was a lot worse but I rewrote it.
Title: Chapter 7 13 Jan 2014 10:16 pm
Reviewer: rosina (Signed) [Report This]
    Nice to see James making an appearance, and Severus start to believe what he's being shown.

    Author's Response:

    I wanted James to be more mature than they had been at school. 

    Given thier past animosity he was probably the last person Snape was wxpecting besides Tobias. 


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