| Title: Part III
| 02 Feb 2014 10:47 pm
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| Reviewer: Kendra Dhyanna (Anonymous)
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Por favor............. actualiza muy pronto!!!
Tu historia esta super buena
This chapter warmed my heart like it gave me some hope for Snape to come the heck around....it's nudging me to go finish my own chapter so I can update..Keep up the good work hun!
I really like the start of this and cant wait to read more!
Yay! Go Harry! I hope Snape will begin looking for the qualities that Lily had. It should be interesting when it all hits the fan about Harry's true parentage. Great work on this chapter! I was so enthralled, I hadn't noticed it was over until the end. Wish there was more already! :3
Really looking forward to reading more, please update again soon!
Yep just what I thought Snape is an evil git. At least Harry hasn't given up on him yet and surprisingly Ron is ok with Snape being Harry's dad and is trying to help.
It was brave and kinda cool in a shocking way how Harry stood up to Snape in the end which cause Snape to think about Harry being Lily's and not James. Once he finally figures it all out I can see Harry going so I am just like my "father" huh and then walk away or something like that.
Harry should show Snape his mothers letter.
| Title: Part II
| 27 Jan 2014 1:08 am
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| Reviewer: moonstruck (Anonymous)
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I liked Harrys first potions class. It was very realistic that he was neither clueless like Snape likes to see him nor some kind of brilliant genius that could have answered every question. I think you found the happy medium.
I liked the way the remembrall incident played out. Of course Hermione would know the incantation to retrieve it though I was surprised that Harry managed to keep his feet on the ground.Poor Harry. It does seem like he is making some headway with Snape though.
| Title: Part I
| 25 Jan 2014 9:42 pm
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| Reviewer: moonstruck (Anonymous)
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This really is a promising start. Poor Harry! I can already see where this is going. Hopefully it all ends well...
I especially liked your other fic so I'm very much looking forward to this one.
| Title: Part I
| 23 Jan 2014 12:28 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very good start to the story, a familiar theme but I think this will have a different twist thank you
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