| Title: The Duel
| 14 Jun 2015 4:39 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Great chapter and I loved the duel, you have a wonderful imagination for duelling!
Thank you a wonderful chapter, I love the conversation between them such passion and conviction.
| Title: When Summer Ends
| 14 Jun 2015 3:33 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Great to be back in this story thank you for the lovely long chapter! I think I've missed some chapters so I'll have to go back and check
I love Harry's character here - I usually dislike stories where Harry is physically abused by the Dursleys, since I feel the treatment he got in canon causes more than enough trauma, and doesn't need to be dramatized to show how damaging neglect can be. But I like how you keep Harry's determination and wisdom here - he was abused, but maintains his strength of character, which I feel is lost in some stories.
Oh poor Harry! I can't wait for the three professors who sided with Snape realize their mistake!
I love Harry's positivity here, and how there's some diversity in the staff. The thought you put into the setting of the school and how it's different from Hogwarts is appreciated too. I can't wait for Harry to change everyone's perception of him! I also like the foreshadowing of a friendship with Draco.
GO HARRY! WOOT! I loved that he's fired up and choosing to take most of the classes. What an exciting development! I hope he shows them all!
I was a little jarred by the mentioning of Sirius' death - I totally forgot that this was a recent event, since it wasn't on Harry's mind in the first chapter. It was such a life-altering event - shouldn't Harry be emotionally affected by it more?
Author's Response: Harry asked the staff and Snape to sign his form before the incident at the Ministry of Magic. That happened a couple of weeks later at the end of the school year. It's funny you should ask if he should be affected by it more, because that's what I thought in the real books. Harry seemed totally unaffected by Sirius death in JK Rowling's book 6. I do have stories where Harry is really affected by it, but in this story, though it is on his mind, he is very occupied with trying to get away from the Dursleys and paying for school, and then dealing with everyone at the school.
I don't know why I found it so hilarious, but I couldn't stop laughing at how Harry essentially forced Snape into signing the form. I love it when Snape gets put into those irritating situations!
| Title: Back To Life
| 07 Jun 2015 2:56 am
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| Reviewer: Kendra Dhyanna (Anonymous)
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Sin duda es un cambio interesante en la trama de la historia, ver un drama adolescente de amores
no estoy segura sobre el Hermione/Harry, pero le estas desarrollando de una manera interesante, así que casi como Harry, esperare a ver que pasa
No obstante, espero que podamos ver más de Harry y Snape,
Author's Response: El romance adolescente no se describirá más allá del siguiente capítulo o capítulo y medio. Hay mucho más de Harry y Snape por venir, y bastantes más vueltas y revueltas en esta historia , así como un poco de acción. Nunca fue la intención de ser un romance de Harry / Hermione , pero terminó de esa manera por sólo un corto tiempo como un medio para hacer otras cosas en la historia ocurren al final de la línea. Gracias por sus comentarios .
| Title: When Summer Ends
| 07 Jun 2015 2:37 am
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| Reviewer: Kendra Dhyanna (Anonymous)
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Lindo capítulo, interesantes reflexiones de Harry sobre la vida, y alabo tu imaginación para crear la teoría de aparición,
brillante capítulo
PD: Según yo, Hermione se enamoro de Harry, eso no me lo esperaba (si es verdad)
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