| Title: The Other Schools
| 07 Jun 2015 1:50 am
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| Reviewer: Kendra Dhyanna (Anonymous)
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Realmente es un muy buen capítulo (mucho mejor que el anterior, porque he de ser sincera, el capítulo del duelo me decepciono bastante)
Ha sido fascinante la descripción de las otras escuelas, y la manera en la que han realizado los tuors ha sido muy interesante
Y la interacción de Harry, con los demás en la ronda a Hogwarts me encanto
I think Harry
Nd Hermione make a better couple Ron is to unintelligent the complete opposite of Hermione. I hope you didn't leave Harry completely destitute,maybe find out about more of an inheritance. I know I keep asking but it bugs me poor guy. Straight from school no job no place to live would suck. Love interaction with Snape.
Author's Response: I don't really know of any orphans in the real world that are left with an inheritance and it was kind of odd for JK to leave him with so much money. I think it makes things too easy for him. Ron and Hermione and other Hogwarts graduates are going to have to start after school with no job and no place to live other than with their family, and after school Harry could always live with the Weasleys while looking for a job. I'm just making this realistic and it also makes it interesting if money isn't just handed to him. Thanks for your continued reviews.
I think Harry
Nd Hermione make a better couple Ron is to unintelligent the complete opposite of Hermione. I hope you didn't leave Harry completely destitute,maybe find out about more of an inheritance. I know I keep asking but it bugs me poor guy. Straight from school no job no place to live would suck. Love interaction with Snape.
I think Harry
Nd Hermione make a better couple Ron is to unintelligent the complete opposite of Hermione. I hope you didn't leave Harry completely destitute,maybe find out about more of an inheritance. I know I keep asking but it bugs me poor guy. Straight from school no job no place to live would suck. Love interaction with Snape.
| Title: Back To Life
| 06 Jun 2015 10:39 am
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| Reviewer: Anna (Anonymous)
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Fantastic:D!! It was kind of cute, how Harry tapsed trough this situation;) I am so happy he asked Snape for advice. I also liek the idea that Harry works the money for his clothes off for Snape. And yeah Harry and Hermione:) Please update really soon!
Wow. It certainly had a lot of stuff we didn't see before, but it was still a great chapter! I love your characterizations of Harry, Ron, Hermione, and Snape. I'm so glad that Ron seems to be growing up, and is thinking more about Hermione than himself. I don't mind the Harry/Hermione take. The characters had it right, it certainly is messy! Great chapter! I love that Harry is working for Snape. I wonder how Harry will earn a broom though, and money for next year. Thanks for the update! I am still really enjoying this story!
Author's Response: Did you miss a chapter? Harry got his Firebolt back.
Its really good, I rexkon you didnt entail the two weeks bcuz they were monotonous? Will we be hearing anything abt those two weeks later on?
Love is one big complicated mess.
| Title: Back To Life
| 06 Jun 2015 5:07 am
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| Reviewer: I KNEW IT! (Anonymous)
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My first reaction when Hermione said "you are"
.... "HAHA!" *claps* "I KNEW IT!!!" and danced in my chair.
I LOVE Harry/Hermione and this was perfectly done.
This was the most excellently written 'triangle' scene I have ever read. It was perfect. I can't even begin to describe how perfect. I normally REALLY dislike triangles, because usually someone is whining about it. LOL. So, fantastic job on this!
Author's Response: Well that's good, becuase I don't think I've ever written a triangle before lol.
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