Trying to envision Ron at Gemini... Glad that it looks like Draco and Harry might be friends back at Hogwarts, and AWWW, the Firebolt! Fantastic description of Apparition! I'd never even tried to wrap my mind around it; it's just what Wizards DO! Love it!
Truly loved your in-depth descriptions of Beauxbatons, Durmstrang, and Boden. The pics were beautiful! Also loved Axle's mum, and his dad was truly surprising, and I never would've guessed! What really struck me about the visits to other schools was the intricacy with which you had described the cultural differences between the different sets of students. Truly amazing!
Kissing Trelawney!!! Ha! Definitely an image I'd rather not dwell on! Exciting dueling sequences, and I was so glad Harry didn't forget his moonfruit... Or that nobody else had either stolen it or piusonef it sitting there in his room. (My imagination was working overtime!)
Really like all the school pics, and where you've been going with the interpersonal relationships.
One grammar detail: lead as a verb is the base form and present tense, lead as a noun is a piece of metal. The past tense of the verb is 'led' without the 'a' in it...
I never understood about harry money situations. How will he able to afford Hogwarts but the school will pay half for Ron next year. His parent s and Sirius should of left him something he should not be completely broke. He has a hard enough life as it is poor kid.
Author's Response: Did you read the first two chapters of the story? Harry spent all of his gold on entrance to Gemini. It was expensive and that's why he had to sell his broom also. If he had chosen not to go to Gemini, he would have had enough money to get through the last two years of Hogwarts and then some.
| Title: When Summer Ends
| 03 Jun 2015 2:39 pm
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| Reviewer: Demi (Anonymous)
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I love this story so much! I can't wait to see what happens about Harry's 6th year school supplies. Who pays for them, is it Snape? If so how will Harry react? Thank you for the recent updates, I really can't wait to see what happens next :)
Doing in great love caring Snape .
Cool story. Not much need for elongating the story more, consideeing the action Harry has faced... I suppose even he deserves some rest. :P
| Title: When Summer Ends
| 02 Jun 2015 11:50 am
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| Reviewer: tb_ll57 (Anonymous)
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Very interesting final line, there. I hadn't thought of it quite like that and it's a sign of maturity in Harry that he does wonder about it, instead of just accepting events as they come to him. Thanks for all the updates!
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