| Title: The Other Schools
| 31 May 2015 11:22 am
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| Reviewer: moonstar (Anonymous)
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do you know, I was just starting to give up on any more chapters. i am so glad that you have not abandoned your stories. They have been my favourites for a long time now. It cheers my day up no end when I find a new chapter. normally I speed read them and then i have to rush out of the house, so I don't always get time to review but I think you deserve to know that your work is appreciated.
Author's Response: Thanks! And you should know, I never abandon stories. I have a family to take care of so I don't always have time. Also, somtimes I get to a place where I'm stuck with a story, and to press on with it right then would just mean I'm turning out garbage, so sometimes taking a step back from it for a whiel (sometimes a long while) is a good thing and that was the case this time. Because I was able to step away from it for several months, then come back and re-read what I had, I came back with new ideas and was able to write several chapters at once. It would not have turned out well at all if I had just kept putting out chapters a few months ago.
| Title: The Other Schools
| 31 May 2015 8:46 am
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| Reviewer: Anna (Anonymous)
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Aesome just awesome :D!!! I don't know how I missed the last chapter but that way I had the pleasure of two new bfantastic chapters in one go. You certainly made my day! The picture swere great, I like what you thought up. And I especially liked the last scene with August!! Please update really soon!
You have no idea how excited I was to wake up to an update. Two updates!!
I'm so pleased to see people finally giving Harry a chance to show them who he actually is, rather than fixate on who they think he is. His last speech to August was so mature. He could definitely be teaching those Gemini bods a thing or two.
So looking forward to more.
Author's Response: It's funny really, because at the start of the story Draco had a moment of realization that really caused him to mature and be more mature through the summer... Draco had unknowingly done what Gan was trying to get Harry to do: walk in someone else's shoes. Harry is still having trouble with that and is having issues seeing anyones point of view but his own, and in that sense is having trouble growing. But the school did change and mature him and he feels different, so he did mature in some ways.
| Title: The Duel
| 31 May 2015 3:26 am
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| Reviewer: jane (Anonymous)
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I am so glad you updated- I love this story. I'm glad Kushi won- it's nice to see Harry be a good loser at something he usually wins at.
Loving the Snape scenes the best (of course.) I really like how Harry is responding to Snape helping him, but is not even aware of it yet.
And... it seems like Harry could have won his duel if he had used magery....
Author's Response: Yeah it's hard because naturally I'm rooting for Harry and want him to win, but the reality is you can't win every time, and I think Harry is humble enough to be a good loser. I really felt writing this whole competition thing that Harry didn't want to do it for the certificate but more for fun and only really did it because Snape wanted him to.
Harry did a good job with the duel even if he lost. I was rather glad the other contestant won. So often Harry is invincible that it was refreshing to have him lose for a change. I'm also happy to see Snape and Adeline's relationship progressing. Naturally, all the students know and are joking about it.
Author's Response: Yeah, I am always rooting for Harry to win but at the same time know that it's not natural for him to win every time and I think he has the good grace to be a good loser when he does lose. It also helps that he likes Kushi and that I like Kushi as a character so it's good to see characters I like win. I was almost sad that Axle and Draco had to lose because I like them as characters in this story too.
thumps up want another Fast as you can! lol
| Title: Alone
| 14 May 2015 2:43 am
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| Reviewer: allie (Anonymous)
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| Title: Alone
| 13 May 2015 4:42 am
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| Reviewer: Mary (Anonymous)
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This story is absolutely BRILLIANT. I really hope you continue working on it because it is one of the best written stories on this site. On the other hand, THAT WAS A TOTALLY EVIL POINT TO STOP YOUR CHAPTER AT. Yes, I do realize that a chapter cannot go on forever, however I AM HOOKED. Brilliant, simply amazing.
This is such a great fic! I really hope you post more at some point ;)
| Title: Alone
| 10 May 2015 10:41 pm
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| Reviewer: Tony Stark (Anonymous)
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I am absolutely in love with thus fic. You have written everyone so well and I love how Draco and Harry have become closer. The general idea of the summer school is absolutely amazing!
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