Another awesome chapter, :) Liking how the story is developing!
Great chapter! :) Thanks for sharing!
Snape scares me in this chapter, I dread (and yet am so excited) to see what will happen next! Awesome writing, :D
Typo here, I think. ( The first team to incapacitate both of their opponents gets the high mark for today. The first team to have both members incapacitated will get a failing mark for the day.)
The second sentence was backward?
Poor Harry, I just want to hug him!
Author's Response: It's just saying the first team wins and the first team out loses.
My goodness, some teachers need to grow up and start treating all their students equally! Loving it so far, nice plot, very interesting and I love the mental images you create--and the time you spent making those visual images! :D
I'm happy Harry doesn't have a 'forget them' attitude and decide not to try at all, I hope he blows them all away!
Holy moly, I'm so glad you wrote this! I thought it was positively Slytherin of Harry to ask Snape in front of all the other teachers, who would be really mad if Snape turned him down after they all had said yes. Nice job, Harry. Thanks for sharing, I'm looking forward to more!
| Title: What He Wanted
| 03 Aug 2014 9:18 pm
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| Reviewer: jessica (Anonymous)
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Amazing. Just like your other works. Very captivating. Keep working on it, I can't wait to read more.
| Title: The Isle of Coll
| 03 Aug 2014 4:27 pm
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| Reviewer: jessica (Anonymous)
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evil, evil, evil, snape. be nice to little harry. love the story and others by you.
Another excellent chapter!
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