Oh wow, what a mess Snape is in now! I'm so glad this story has hit a turning point and Snape's stopped being so horrible. I loved Draco's human side in this chapter. Super super chapter!
| Title: From The Inside Out
| 22 Jan 2014 12:52 pm
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| Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous)
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oh very nice sev is pissed and being an azz what the heck man ... more please when you can I love this!
Actually, I admire Axle for asking Harry directly if he did it. Tho' Harry thought Axle had some nerve, I'd put a different interpretation on it. Axle wasn't willing to blindly believe rumors-- he gave Harry the chance to speak for himself, and that says a lot for Axle's character. Over 15 years ago, a supposed friend told lies about me to people, and not a single one of them ever asked me for my side of the situation. Instead, they literally turned their backs on me, choosing to believe the groundless lies. That was one of the most devastating experiences of my life, and I can relate so well to how Harry must feel. I just wish he could see Axle's query in a different light. Great story so far! :-)
Author's Response: Thanks. Yeah, I actually had the same thing happen to me, twice. Someone like once and the other time someone was mistaken and said something that wasn't true about me, and both times my best friend believed them without even asking me my side of it. It caused HUGE problems. That's exactly why Axle did ask. He was trying to make up his own mind, just like Ernie was. Thanks for the review :)
| Title: From The Inside Out
| 22 Jan 2014 7:35 am
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| Reviewer: Rye (Signed)
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This is a great new story. Love your new spin on the classic Snape and Harry at loggerheads story. I hate to see Harry treated so badly, though. I hope that Snape comes to his senses pretty soon! I hope Harry gets treated better, or he should get a full refund because of unacceptable bullying. I can't wait for your next update!!! Love the maps, it seems so gorgeous there!
Author's Response: Thanks. But what's 'At Loggerheads' mean?
Hermione is fierce!
Snape is so convinced about Harry and is so mean to him, it's hard to believe he'll ever change. Even if Snape finds out the truth, it's probably likely he'll still harbour some resentment (rational or not) towards Harry.
you know what, Hermione should just obliviate Snape's memories of the Maruaders all together. Everyone, including Snape, would be so much better off.
Looking forward to the final chapters!!!
Parts of this are incredibly painful to read--and what I mean by that is your story is so gripping, and so beautifully described, that you can't help but feel Harry's pain, as if you are really there with him, at all the absurd unfairness of all he has been through/is going through.
And the end of this chapter was simply chilling. I can't help but just despise the Snape you've drawn at this point. In contrast, I love what you're doing with Draco. Perhaps he can be some point of context which can eventually right Snape's perceptions.
Anyway, I can't wait for more!
| Title: From The Inside Out
| 22 Jan 2014 2:31 am
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| Reviewer: lunaz (Anonymous)
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This story just grabs you and keeps your attention right to the end. The various interaction between the characters is well thought of and done nicely. I look forward to the next chapter.
| Title: From The Inside Out
| 22 Jan 2014 1:59 am
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| Reviewer: projectjay (Anonymous)
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Shape needs a good kick in the Ares along with a few other teachers I hope th we y find out they were wrong as bout harry
Really love this story, location completely new and different. Like the other schools and different magic subjects, like wandless and meditation.
Pictures and plans are really helpful to story.
Am interested to find out what's happening with Draco, what is Snape going to do next?
Hope this will be a long story, please update soon.
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