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Title: Shared Losses 08 Aug 2014 11:29 am
Reviewer: Eszther (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I had not planned to cry shortly after breakfast but your wonderful chapter was worth it, thank you!
    It still baffles me how anyone has the skill to write a totally convincing positive interaction between Severus and a Golden Retriever but you have done it marvellously.

    Author's Response: Thank you so much Eszther for your kind, encouraging words. :) It's great to know you loved the therapy dog scene.
Title: Shared Losses 08 Aug 2014 8:13 am
Reviewer: Lili (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wonderful chapter! Made me cry. Love the therapy dog. You have an amazing writing style.

    Author's Response: Hi Lili! So glad you are still enjoying the story, and think my writing style is amazing! That's a real boost. Sometimes the writing just doesn't come easy or feel like it's working out and it is hard to see from the reader's eyes, so it is awesome to hear that you really like it!
Title: A Proposed Meeting 20 Jul 2014 11:42 pm
Reviewer: teriwright (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm very happy I stumbled upon this story. You are capturing the thought processes so very well, it's like you're in my head. It's very hard to re-wire one's thinking - sabotaging self thoughts that have been drilled into you for a lifetime. harry's thoughts of him being a failure are pure Vernon, but Harry has internalized these thoughts into his own. It will be very hard to get Vernon out of Harry's head.

    The slow process of Snape and Harry coming to understand each other is a joy to read. I really can't wait for more!

    Author's Response: Thank you so much for the detailed review! I do believe it has made my week! I am so pleased to hear that you feel the thought processes are accurate. You are so right about re-wiring the brain. So difficult, and Harry's struggles do defitely stem from those hard years with his brain developing in such a harsh environment. It is especially good to hear you are liking the slow process of Harry and Snape's relationship. Too often I find people rush it in their stories, or rush authors here to immediately forge that intimate understanding between Harry and Severus, but realistically, it would take a long, long time. So I am so relieved to hear that somebody is on the same page, and enjoying the process. Thanks a lot, teriwright, and I hope to hear more of your interesting thoughts! Cheers, Whitetail.
Title: A Proposed Meeting 20 Jul 2014 10:33 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you for updating, love this Severus you can almost see his robes billowing

    Author's Response: Haha, yes, Severus and his billowing robes. You are welcome for the update, and thank you for dropping a line!
Title: A Proposed Meeting 20 Jul 2014 3:07 pm
Reviewer: rosina (Signed) [Report This]
    Good to see a bit of the old Snape back - liked his dealing with the Auror. Its slightly worrying though that his motivation is only coming through his need to help Harry, and not really for himself. Still, anything has to be progress.

    Author's Response: Yes, a bit worrying about where his motivation is coming from. But that's how it goes - slow recovery, usually just the little things that get you to start going again. Good to hear you are liking it!
Title: A Proposed Meeting 18 Jul 2014 12:45 am
Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed) [Report This]
    Thanks for updating! :-)

    Author's Response: You're welcome! And thanks for the review!
Title: A Proposed Meeting 17 Jul 2014 3:21 pm
Reviewer: Severus Draconis Potter (Signed) [Report This]
    I feel jipped...did I spell tht right? lol. This chapter was very good but it as super short but I know how summer is

    Nice work

    Author's Response: Hmm, no idea if that's how you spell "jipped", haha! Glad to know you liked the chapter. Yeah, it was short. I had the week that came from hell, so I am sorry about that. :S Good to hear what I could get posted was appreciated, though. Cheers!
Title: A Proposed Meeting 17 Jul 2014 3:04 pm
Reviewer: snapefan_17 (Signed) [Report This]
    great chapter, nice to see has more courage and has found a purpose

    Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to share your thoughts! Yes, good to see a little purpose on Snape's part.
Title: A Proposed Meeting 17 Jul 2014 11:57 am
Reviewer: crotia (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you. I wonder how Daisy(that was her name right?) is going to react to this new/old Snape

    Author's Response: Yes, Daisy was her name. Hmm, one does wonder. Thanks for the review.
Title: A Proposed Meeting 17 Jul 2014 9:15 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Awesome, awesome, I love it! Thanks for the update! Snape is back! Well, sort of Snape, at least working SNape, has a mission Snape. I love your characters. Well done!

    Author's Response: Hi Jan! Good to hear from you. I am glad that you are enjoying the story and feel it is well done. It's been so difficult to keep this one going for me, so I am so pleased to hear it is appreciated. Ah yes ... a little of the old Snape. Hurrah! Cheers!

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