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Title: Daisy's Story 02 Jun 2014 3:51 am
Reviewer: Abie (Signed) [Report This]
    Thanks for another great chapter! Speaking as someone with personal experience with eating disorders, I feel that you've portrayed the concept quite accurately, and respectfully as well. Often, people tend to oversimplify mental health issues, and I appreciate the fact that you did not.

    Author's Response: Hey Abie! Oh, I am so glad you feel that I did the concept justice - I have been lucky not to have suffered from an eating disorder, but have had very close friends who have. It's such a multi-faceted issue, and isn't just a fear of getting "fat"! So I am glad that you felt that portion was fairy accurate/respectful. Thanks so much for your feedback, Abie. It's always helpful to hear from people who have personal experience on the matter. Cheers!
Title: Daisy's Story 02 Jun 2014 3:26 am
Reviewer: Artizay (Signed) [Report This]
    I really love you characterize Severus in here. He's, well, human, and really endearingly clumsy and adorable in his own way.

    And I love Daisy - she's just so sweet and her story is so sad. It's terrible that anyone has to go through that.

    The only qualm I have, to be honest, is if they get in a romantic relationship. I think it's because I have trouble liking OCs in general, and even less so if they are shipped with a canon character because they tend to take up all the spotlight if you aren't careful.

    I mean, if you want to do it go for the ship, I guess. I'm not going to argue. Just putting my opinion out there. :)

    Author's Response: Hey Artizay! Thanks for your opinion on OCs. Yes, the only purpose they seem to serve, at least on this site, is to fall in love, haha. Personally, I think most people really don't give a darn about OCs, so I try not to do nothing but tell the OC's story. So hopefully you don't have to worry about that. I'm glad you are enjoying the story, and Severus' characterization.
Title: Waking Up 29 May 2014 8:12 am
Reviewer: Liza (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I think this chapter is a great continuation from the previous one - after all the violent cracking up, and Harry's struggle, we get to see lethargic numbness of Snape, which is just as terrible. Both characters' strength is remarkable! And I hope for some big revelations about Daisy soon, her absence is most suspicious :)

    Author's Response: Great to hear that you enjoyed the chapter! Ah yes, Daisy will show up more in the next chapter. Thanks for the review!
Title: Cracks 28 May 2014 11:32 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Hard to read so must have been hard to write! Thank you a great chapter

    Author's Response: It was hard to write. Glad you liked it though, Fmh.
Title: Waking Up 28 May 2014 7:41 am
Reviewer: shadowienne (Anonymous) [Report This]
    "Waking Up" indeed! The title & subject matter of your chapter feels ironic to me after I woke up ABRUPTLY Friday night after accidentally gouging (& I do not use that word lightly!) a piece of skin out of my cheek (half an inch above the right corner of my mouth) with one of my fingernails! Yowww! I had NEVER done that since I was maybe a baby! Gave me a totally new perspective on the extent of damage that Harry can inflict upon himself when he goes at it. Gee... And how shocking the wounds are for other people to see. I think the sight may have sent poor Snape into a state of shock...

    Author's Response: Woah ... it's like I wrote this chapter for you, haha! Hope your cheek gets better. Nothing worse than accidental gougings ... ;) Thanks for the review !
Title: Cracks 28 May 2014 12:30 am
Reviewer: Liza (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh this is the chapter that's been anticipated for so long, and I think it fulfilled the purpose of showing Harry's and Snape's parallels wonderfully. Thank you so much, I loved it.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks, Liza! Great to hear you felt this chapter showed Harry and Snape's parallels well. You are most welcome, and I greatly appreciate the feedback! Cheers.

     

Title: Waking Up 26 May 2014 12:12 pm
Reviewer: snapefan_17 (Signed) [Report This]
    great cant wait for next update

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review, snapefan 17!
Title: Waking Up 26 May 2014 12:12 pm
Reviewer: snapefan_17 (Signed) [Report This]
    great cant wait for next update
Title: Waking Up 26 May 2014 3:15 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great chapter as usual. Love the Harry/Stephen interactions. Thanks for the extra update.

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Awesome to hear you are enjoying Harry and Stephen's scenes. You are most welcome. I figured updating on Sunday would help me get back to my usual posting schedule.
Title: Waking Up 26 May 2014 2:55 am
Reviewer: Lili (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I really loved the development of Severus in this chapter, as well as the development of the relationship between Harry and Stephen. Lovely as always. Looking forward to more! :D

    Author's Response: Thanks so much for another thoughtful review, Lili! Always great to hear what people think are the strong points in the chapters.

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