Socks as the deciding factor was priceless! Not to me too Severus in sunglasses and leather jacket! With his boots on the table! Petunia will need an extended cruise after those guests left! But disguising Dumbledore as an old woman-- I wish I could have seen it for real!
Author's Response: Haha, great to hear you liked it, Shadow! I thought the socks thing was rather nice. Glad you liked the visit with the Dursleys'. I had a little fun with that. Could you tell? ;)
| Title: September: A Beginning's End
| 05 May 2015 8:25 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you for sharing your wonderful story a real privilege for me to read it! Good luck with your projects and remember there are always people eager to read your writings at this site!
Author's Response: Hey, Fmh. Always a pleasure to hear from you. Thanks so much for the luck - and yes, I will never forget that there are awesome people like you hanging out at P&S! If I do any other HP stories, they will be on here for you guys in a flash. Cheers, Whitetail.
| Title: Return to Hogwarts
| 05 May 2015 8:13 pm
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Lovely chapter thank you!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review, Fmh! Hardly anyone reviews the first chapter if you post two at a time :/ So, Cheers! :)
| Title: A Terrible Example
| 05 May 2015 8:08 pm
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Loved it! Especially the scene at the Dursley's! I love your Severus he has a sense of humour!
Author's Response: Haha, glad to hear you got a kick out of Severus' sense of humour. I had way too much fun with that!
Ahh thanks so much for not only writing this fic but finishing it too! It means so much as a reader to have that completion :) ive loved reading it and will definitely re read it at some point :)
Author's Response: You're welcome. :) I'm so glad that you have enjoyed the story enough to read again at some point. Cheers!
| Title: September: A Beginning's End
| 04 May 2015 12:27 am
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| Reviewer: Abie (Signed)
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Such a beautiful, touching ending. Thank you for a wonderful story.
Author's Response: It's nice to hear from you, Abie. :) I'm glad you enjoyed the ending, and the story. Cheers, Whitetail.
| Title: September: A Beginning's End
| 03 May 2015 11:56 pm
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| Reviewer: BlueWater5 (Anonymous)
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Great story! Nice character development and well-written. Would love to see a one-shot follow-on sometime.
Author's Response: Hey BlueWater5! Thanks so much for sharing your thoughts. It's awesome to hear you enjoyed the story. I don't know if I will do a one shot - but one never does know until an idea smacks you over the head. haha! Cheers!
| Title: September: A Beginning's End
| 03 May 2015 10:42 pm
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| Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed)
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Happy ending! :-)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, cckeimig! You know, this almost wasn't a happy ending at all. I was so, incredibly close to having Stephen die accidentally after cutting himself too deep, when his father told him he couldn't go away for school like they'd agreed. Lucky for Stephen, he's at Beauxbatons, and not dead. Close shave for him ... Cheers!
| Title: September: A Beginning's End
| 03 May 2015 5:54 pm
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| Reviewer: Eszther (Anonymous)
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Thank you ever so much for this story. It should be compusory reading for teachers and teenagers ...
Author's Response: Oh, wow, Eszther! Compuslory reading? I'm practically speechless. Thanks so very much for your reviews! Cheers, Whitetail.
| Title: September: A Beginning's End
| 03 May 2015 4:20 pm
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| Reviewer: rosina (Signed)
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Thanks for a good ending, leaving us with solid hope that the boys will make it through. I'm sorry there won't be more from you as I've always enjoyed your fics immensely - good spelling and grammar is always a bonus, you've always managed to keep the magic, even time travel plausible to read, and the characterisation has suited what I like to read. Wishing you lots of luck with your book, and I hope you are able to make your dreams come true.
Author's Response: Hey rosina! I really owe you a thank you for all the reviews you've left over the years. There's a good chance another story will show up from me eventually - just no idea when - so I guess this isn't entirely a goodbye. I am so glad you have enjoyed the stories I've written for P&S. I've really worked hard to make them readable, and enjoyable. Thanks for the luck! Goodness knows I'l need it. :) High fives and cookies, Whitetail.
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