How come Lockhart hasn't been mentioned yet? This is 2nd year right?
Author's Response: It's not about Lockheart. I didn't mention Hagrid either but he's there.
| Title: Breaking The Fall
| 01 Jan 2015 7:43 pm
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| Reviewer: Anna (Anonymous)
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Thank you sooo much for finishing this amazing story! Love it:D!
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| 01 Jan 2015 3:14 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you for a lovely story I had a lump in my throat reading this. Happy New Year and happy writing
| Title: Breaking The Fall
| 30 Dec 2014 2:53 am
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| Reviewer: PlzUpdateBondOfBlood:MakersOfOldAndAmongGeminiTrees (Anonymous)
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I love your stories! This is one of my favorites, though I wish you would update Bond of Blood:Makers of Old and Among Gemini Trees. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update them!!!
| Title: Breaking The Fall
| 29 Dec 2014 4:49 pm
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| Reviewer: Yulliah (Anonymous)
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God, you had me crying most of the way through...
well see, I did want to review this wonderful story anyway, so let me know if you got the notice for this review.
Great ending. Sad to see the story end, but glad that Harry got his father finally and that Snape is protecting Harry.
I am sad there will not be a sequel though, but I understand that you have many other responsibilities.
I was glad you provided the reason Harry and Snape found out about their relationship as well as the aftermath. Having Thomas tell off his Head of House was a nice scene. Thomas seemed to like Harry and I was glad he stepped forward. I especially liked the empty box. That was such a neat touch. Thanks for a really fun story.
I hope Harry makes his 50 points. He certainly is trying hard. Severus isn't making it easy for him though.
I'm a little surprised that they know that he is working on gaining so many points cine they only have a couple of classes together. Hermione must have taken his question and the way he is participating in class and put two and two together.
Snape has to do something about the abuse. As Head of Slytherin, he can't permit that kind of behavior, especially when the other teachers are aware of it.
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