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Reviews For Child of Innocence
Title: Chapter 32 26 May 2014 11:53 pm
Reviewer: Outlawgal (Signed) [Report This]
    lol I think every girl should learn how to do that move :P
    Sirius prank gift to Severus was great. Too bad Sev would never be caught dead in red and gold unless they were hidden like the underwear :P Ok never mind he never would wear red and gold.
Title: Chapter 25 25 May 2014 2:42 am
Reviewer: Tsukinoko3 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    That makes more sense, I was wondering why you didn't explain what caused Ron's change of heart.

    Author's Response: Thanks for letting me know! 
Title: Chapter 31 25 May 2014 2:38 am
Reviewer: Outlawgal (Signed) [Report This]
    I know Lily would be Happy that Harry is with Severus rather then her sister. James may have been mad at first but he would have gotten over it cause anyone was better then Petunia.
Title: Chapter 30 18 May 2014 12:47 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Nice how you are twisting the original and changing it thank you
Title: Chapter 29 18 May 2014 12:37 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter thank you
Title: Chapter 28 18 May 2014 12:08 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved the ball, glad Harry was a little nicer to his date in this version!
Title: Chapter 27 16 May 2014 11:30 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Lovely chapter, I love the struggles of the boys
Title: Chapter 30 16 May 2014 11:25 pm
Reviewer: Outlawgal (Signed) [Report This]
    I was just thinking as you had Harry put it in the windowsill that it had to be frozen cold. Especially when you said the water was warm when Harry put his head in.
    Nice riddle clue by the way. I can never get things to work out like that :)
Title: Chapter 29 16 May 2014 11:12 pm
Reviewer: Outlawgal (Signed) [Report This]
    yeah he got his voice back.
Title: Chapter 28 16 May 2014 10:57 pm
Reviewer: Outlawgal (Signed) [Report This]
    awww come on where was the kiss :P

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