| Title: Still Living
| 17 Aug 2014 1:39 pm
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| Reviewer: C (Anonymous)
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Loved the update, I think you are really keeping the pair in character and I look forward to reading more
| Title: Still Living
| 17 Aug 2014 10:05 am
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| Reviewer: fiona (Anonymous)
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What a great line at the end with Snape. I can just see him there, standing in the rain, stirrer dripping. I also very much lie his reward system with Harry.
I found the dynamic with Dudley to be very interesting as well. It's not easy to grow up around abuse, even if you're not the victim. I like your portrayal of the fear and powerlessness he must have felt. It must all be emotionally confusing for poor Harry.
Harry's reaction to finding out he had money also exhibits genuine and believable internal conflict. Good job!
Snape is a true Slytherin. Who else would offer a reward if Harry would answer questions? Harry seems to be somewhat suspicious but is gradually starting to trust Snape. Harry's reaction to Diagon Alley should be interesting. Being in school should be good for Harry. He has too much time to stew about things at Severus' house.
I love this story. Congratulations on winning and getting featured!
| Title: Flight or Fall
| 14 Aug 2014 3:15 pm
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| Reviewer: fiona (Anonymous)
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This is the most touching chapter yet. I don't even know what else to say. *Love*
| Title: Flight or Fall
| 12 Aug 2014 5:07 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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A difficult chter to read and must have been difficult to write. You handled it very well and realistically thank you
He needs to talk but at the same it is horrible. Enjoy the little steps to trust. timec
| Title: Flight or Fall
| 12 Aug 2014 6:06 am
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| Reviewer: anna (Anonymous)
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Wow this story is so awesome!! Poor Harry... I am Glad Snape got him to start talking. Please update soon!!
| Title: Flight or Fall
| 12 Aug 2014 5:41 am
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| Reviewer: Andrea (Anonymous)
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Another great chapter very well written!! You are a talented writer!
| Title: Flight or Fall
| 08 Aug 2014 3:34 pm
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| Reviewer: Sissi (Signed)
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Hi!
This chapter is wonderful:) I like the way you didn't make all their interactions emotional, it's good to see a fanfiction where they actually talk about normal things:)
I can't wait to see what's gonna happen!
Love
Silvia
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