You have completely captured the actions and thought processes of an abused kid. Lack of trust and suspicion and confusion are so eloquently captured. Very well done and i can't wait for more!
| Title: How to Save a Life
| 20 Jul 2014 6:17 am
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| Reviewer: Lindsey (Anonymous)
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Best story I've read in a while
This was a very intense chapter, and handled incredibly well. The whole story has been very good, I read through the whole 12 chapters in a sitting. I simply could not stop. You have created very compelling views on Severus and Harry.
Look forward to more chapters.
| Title: How to Save a Life
| 18 Jul 2014 6:38 am
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| Reviewer: Kendra Dhyanna (Anonymous)
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Wow!!!
Sencillamente wow!!!
Estoy sin palabras esto fue tan genial, es impresionante, y wow!!!
Es decir, no solo todo el dramatismo del intento de suicidio sino el que hayas podido establecer realmente un puente desde la comprensión de ambos personajes
fue genial,
que este niño tan fuerte y cansado,
le permita la entrada a Severus fue sencillamente genial
precioso capítulo
| Title: How to Save a Life
| 18 Jul 2014 1:44 am
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| Reviewer: Lea (Anonymous)
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Great :)
Reading this chapter was also very intense experience.
It's really great. And - despite of verything - optimistic for my.
| Title: How to Save a Life
| 17 Jul 2014 8:55 pm
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| Reviewer: crotia (Signed)
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"how to save a life" I HATE that song. It always makes me feel miserable and makes me want to do ... things. Oh well. I always find this point in stories beautiful. But in real life this point really sucks. I guess I'm just jealous I don't have Snape. Oh well, you're stories is great as always and I too would've had serious problems if it wasn't for the p&s c2 at fanfiction.net
| Title: How to Save a Life
| 17 Jul 2014 3:48 pm
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| Reviewer: Bones (Signed)
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Same here - went through withdrawal. :) Good to see Harry finally releasing all that emotion. It is interesting to note that despite his condition, Harry still had the capacity to analyse the blood replenisher potion!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! Yes, I was waiting for that moment where Harry would let go. The way I see it, Harry was analyzing the potion, a bit desperately, to avoid thinking about the elephant in the room.
Snape handled that well. It should help Harry that someone understands and has been in the same position.
I was so glad when the site came back up. I was in withdrawal all weekend, checking several times a day to see if it was back yet.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! Yes, Snape handled that a whole lot better than most people would. I was also checking the cite five times a day. It's so sad. But I make no apologies :)
i'm glad snape got there in time. if id have tried that my parents would have done exactly what snape did. then they would turn me over their knee and spank away at my butt for harming myself. :)
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! Snape was probably worried enough to want to whack Harry too, but he'd end up with another panic attack on his hands ;)
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