| Title: Storm of Fire
| 22 Jun 2014 3:38 pm
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| Reviewer: Demi (Anonymous)
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I really love how this story is progressing. Here are some of my favourite stories:
- Resonance (and its two sequels)
- Taming snakes
- A shadowed soul
If you haven't read them already you should give them a go!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I just started Taming Snakes and I'm totally hooked! Thanks so much for that.
| Title: Storm of Fire
| 22 Jun 2014 11:11 am
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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Great writing as always, although I felt like this chapter didn't have much of a sense of direction until the end. Other than that, great chapter, loved the part with Jade and the treehouse :) and I'm glad you decided to read In Care Of. Have you finished? There's a sequel called Tightrope although I don't believe it's completed. Alrighty, update soon! :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I do hear your point about the lack of direction; this chapter was a bit difficult to write because of that, but I really am going somewhere :) I'm glad you liked the Jade scene; it was kind of difficult - I didn't want to make the kids seems like sociopathic eight year olds, but I wanted to realistically portray just how much pain they were in. About In Care Of, I read it straight through and went right to the sequel, I'm so annoyed that it's not complete, and hasn't been updated in ages. It was definitely worth the aggravation, though, so thanks a million for that.
i hope harry doesn't do anything rashly.
Author's Response: I would hope so too, but, sadly, many of our greatest hopes and wishes tend not to come to fruition...
| Title: Storm of Fire
| 22 Jun 2014 7:32 am
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| Reviewer: Fiona (Anonymous)
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I love this story, and I appreciate the care you are taking with keeping the pace of the character development realistic, but oh it's so hard to wait for the next chapter each time I finish one! I want to see how they develop already! Okay, okay, I'll stop being so impatient and wait with my hands folded for the story to continue.
Btw, I especially loved Harry's changing reason for not wanting to be touched. He's grown to realize that Snape won't harm him, but he still isn't ready to accept comfort. It's very genuine. I wonder if Snape has picked up on that change, or if he still thinks it's out of an automatic reaction of fear.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm really glad you like the pace of the story, though I do realize how irritating it can be to wait for the good stuff :) I really appreciate that you noticed what I did with Harry's changing reactions; it's a pretty delicate process.
I've been really enjoying the story, was glad to see that you updated. I hope Harry and Severus get to have more of a talk soon about Dumbledore and Harry's life.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! This chapter is leading up to a climax in Harry and Snape's relationship, so there are some serious conversations coming up pretty soon.
I still love love where this is going. I also really like how you are using Harry to sort of describe the typical manipulative!Dumbledore, yet making Dumbledore (I think?) kind. It's pretty cool.
Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, I thought it would be interesting to do the opposite of the typical scenario, where Harry trusts Dumbledore while the old man manipulates every detail of his life. Instead, I had Harry think that Dumbledore's manipulating him, while really...
| Title: Chess Master
| 20 Jun 2014 2:25 pm
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| Reviewer: hule (Anonymous)
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i wonder where he will be sorted. :)
i wonder where he will be sorted. :)
i wonder where he will be sorted. :)
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