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Title: In the Dark Room 04 Jun 2014 4:42 pm
Reviewer: Ann Jinn (Signed) [Report This]
    I really liked Harry thinking about what a normal family should be and the contrast with his reaction to the dark closet. This is the thing I don't think the original author understood about abused children, how long the recovery is if there ever is one.

    Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I'm not quite sure what you mean, in that the author doesn't understand abused children. In what sense does that show in my writing? I appreciate constructive criticism, and if something is unrealistic, I'd work on it, but you weren't all that clear in your criticism. Would you mind expounding upon your comment?
Title: In the Dark Room 04 Jun 2014 3:48 pm
Reviewer: Quynce (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter, great story. I love the internal side to Harry-- his distrust, intelligence, fear. With Snape, I like the human touches-- he's harsher than he means to be, then he's clearly shocked and worried. And the author doesn't just state those things, they are revealed in actions or the way the character speaks. It's great.

    Author's Response: Thank you so much! It's really good to hear that you think I've done a good job writing my characters.
Title: In the Dark Room 04 Jun 2014 3:48 pm
Reviewer: Demi (Anonymous) [Report This]
    That was a brilliant chapter, well done! I can't wait to see what happens next and when/how Snape finds out about Harry's past.

    Author's Response: Thank you! There's some pretty intense stuff coming up soon, so stay tuned. And when Snape finds out... well, that'll be fun.
Title: In the Dark Room 04 Jun 2014 2:32 pm
Reviewer: bones (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I like your writing style. You make my day every time I see an update to your story!

    Author's Response: Thank you! Your review makes my day as well!
Title: In the Dark Room 04 Jun 2014 2:21 pm
Reviewer: Eszther (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I nearly cry with every new chapter. Your story is wonderfully written and I think Snape is very much in character. Thank you!

    Author's Response: Wow. I almost made you cry? Thank you! That's a real compliment, it means I've done my job right ;)
Title: In the Dark Room 04 Jun 2014 1:25 pm
Reviewer: ange29000 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great chapter, will Snape know about Harry's past before school start?

    Author's Response: yeah, for the most part. All in good time. Thanks for reviewing!
Title: In the Dark Room 04 Jun 2014 10:45 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I cant believe you. Really. What kind of evil author are you, ending all your chapters with evil cliffhangers? (I think i gave some advice on this actually, a few chapters back. I knew I'd regret it.) But really. One of your best chapters, along with the first three. Its summer now, so you'll have less excuses not to update ;) UPDATE, PLEASE!

    Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I really glad you liked this chapter. Yes, unfortunately for you, I did take your advice into account, but this chapter didn't have a cliffie... was that considered a ciffie? I didn't think so... hmmm... I guess the evil comes so natually that I didn't even notice ;)
Title: In the Dark Room 04 Jun 2014 9:27 am
Reviewer: severusphoenix (Signed) [Report This]
    Excellent update. Things are moving along, though I hope that Snape starts investigating a bit, though there might not be much evidence left in the muggle world, unless Mrs Figg knows anything.

    Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! Oh, yes, when Snape finds out the details, I've no doubt that all hell will break loose... But Mrs. Figg. Dear old Mrs. Figg. I wouldn't bet on her providing any information. Where the hell was she in canon? That's what I'd like to know. Yeah, Dumbles probably would've done nothing, anyhow, but still...
Title: In the Dark Room 04 Jun 2014 8:20 am
Reviewer: ilreies (Signed) [Report This]
    heya! happy for the update and am certainly glad to see there is a sense of warming up to each other between Snape and Harry! tho i am sure Harry is definitely still holding himself back.

    oh hope you dont mind me pointing it out but i did spot a typing error:
    "Harry figured that there must me a numbing aspect of the spell" > must me -> must be?

    other than that, i can't wait to read about how Snape feel about what happened to Harry in this chapter! (:

    Author's Response: Thanks for pointing that out! I'll definitely go back and fix it. After a while, it's hard to notice your own errors...
Title: In the Dark Room 04 Jun 2014 6:43 am
Reviewer: animefreak728 (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm really enjoying this story so far. And I've convijced my cousin to continue reading it with me (under agreement that I skip any part having to do with sexual abuse).

    Anyway other than that we both are really enjoy reading this. We both really like how you portrayed Snape and Harry.

    Snape seems carry without being out of character, and Harry's comments are interesting and often amusing. The way that Harry is building trust in Severus is done really well too, as it's going at a more believable pace and not rushed like in a lot of fanfics I've read. I'm really impressed. :)

    Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I'm really glad to hear that I haven't lost a reader. I did respond to your previous comment; I don't know if you noticed, but your cousin won't have to worry about any graphic details. It's really good to hear that you like my portrayals of Harry and Snape, and that you think the pace is believable.

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