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Title: In the Dark Room 04 Jun 2014 1:31 am
Reviewer: snapefan_17 (Signed) [Report This]
    good so far though harry is getting slightly irritating with his paranoia

    Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! Ha, about Harry, I have to agree; I was getting a bit annoyed, myself. Considering what he's been through, however, his paranoia and distrust is only natural...
Title: The Safe Place 31 May 2014 3:28 am
Reviewer: Twinheart (Signed) [Report This]
    This is one of the most insightful, thoughtful, and well-written fics I've read in a long time. Harry's perspective and thought-processes are fascinating, and compellingly realistic. Well done! Keep up the good work!

    Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate your feedback, and it means a lot, especially coming from a writer as talented as yourself. (I've read Equilibrium and Evolution and they are among my favorites).
Title: Too Good to be True 29 May 2014 10:03 am
Reviewer: animefreak728 (Signed) [Report This]
    You never mentioned anything about sexual abuse, which I'm assuming the part about the bed and pain meant.

    A lot of people are uncomfortable with that topic so it might have been best to mention it. I was reading this with my cousin but now she refuses to read, unfortunately.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you for your review. Yes, I am aware that many people are uncomfortable with the topic, which is why any reference to it in my story has been and will continue to be entirely vague. I only intend to provide enough information to make readers aware that something happened in that regard, without providing any detail. Truth be told, I don't know the details myself, nor do I want to. The chapter I most recently posted (chapter 8) is the first that contains any obvious references, so I therefore provided readers with a warning.

    I do take your concerns very seriously, and I appreciate you taking the time to inform me of them. I apologize if I've made anyone uncomfortable.

Title: The Safe Place 27 May 2014 12:51 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved Jade and the tree house thank you for an interesting discussion on physics and magic!

    Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. It's good to know that I'm not the only one interesting in intellectual discussions on science; I tend to ramble on a bit, sometimes.
Title: The Safe Place 25 May 2014 1:49 am
Reviewer: Leonore (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great chapter! I loved Jade, Harry's and hers relationship reminded me a bit of Sev and Lily as children... I bet that Harry is gonna meet her again at Hogwartz. The discussion on physics and magic in the end was very interesting, Harry is an exceptionally bright boy ... Snape seemed a bit impressed, it would be very interesting to "hear" it all from Snape's POV, his thoughts on Harry.

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review! You know, I never actually thought of Sev and Lily when I wrote this chapter, interesting observation.
Title: The Safe Place 24 May 2014 8:50 pm
Reviewer: Lea (Anonymous) [Report This]
    nice chapter. I hope that - maybe (?) Jade will appear in future? Not only in Harry's memories.

    Very interesting explanations about relation between physics and magic :)

    Waiting for the next chapter in which I hope Severus will know more about Harry :) Although I must say, that I like the slight tension between them.
Title: The Safe Place 24 May 2014 3:16 pm
Reviewer: Demi (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great chapter, thanks for the update! I can't wait to read the next chapter :)
Title: The Safe Place 24 May 2014 12:55 pm
Reviewer: Lili (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This chapter was wonderfully interesting! An important detail of his past revealed? I can't wait.
Title: The Safe Place 24 May 2014 9:39 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Yay! Another chapter! Nice writing, loved the part with Jade in it. Kudos to Jade! :) Looking forward to the next chapter, hopefully there's a little more angst in there? Update update update!

    Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! Yes, you can be assured that the next chapter contains more than enough angst, so stay tuned
Title: The Safe Place 24 May 2014 9:02 am
Reviewer: Outlawgal (Signed) [Report This]
    Hmm I bet Jade comes to Hogwarts

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