I very much liked Jade, brief though her appearance was. Hope you can have her appear in the future.
The talk about science was interesting ... hope you explore the ideas further.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I'm glad you like Jade; I like her too, though I take no credit for her character, as she appeared in my head fully formed. I do have a few more scienific discussions in mind, so stay tuned.
I was glad Jade showed up. It added some interesting details to Harry's life and some depth. I like the civil Snape. He seems more than willing to teach and work with Harry which should help in gaining Harry's trust. Though what happens after he learns about what Harry went through should be interesting.
| Title: The Safe Place
| 24 May 2014 5:42 am
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| Reviewer: JLP (Anonymous)
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I liked the chapter a great deal. It was good to progress their relationship and to give more insight into Harry's thinking.
| Title: The Safe Place
| 24 May 2014 2:53 am
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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Oh, I really like your addition of Jade to the story. What a great way to enrich Harry's back story while giving him a believable safe place to go to for Occlumency. I really love this story. Kudos!
Loved the chapter. Really hope to see jade again.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm glad you liked the chapter; I did enjoy writing it. About Jade, you'll just have to keep reading...
This is so excellent so far! Keep up the great work! You are doing an excellent job with Snape and Harry as characters - not rushing things but keeping us interested. I love it!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I appreciate the feedback, it's very encouraging.
I'm really enjoying this very distrustful, eager to be in control version of Harry. Severus is a lot more cannon, but with more humanity. I like all the little touches that make the characters seem more realistic-- Harry's hostile inner monologue, Severus avoiding Harry even though he should be seeing to his injuries, etc.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you like my characterizations. Your description of them was exactly what I was going for, so I guess I got it right :)
| Title: Part of the Plot
| 20 May 2014 12:58 am
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| Reviewer: cinderella (Anonymous)
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Thanks för the update, great interaction between Snape and Harry, if anyone can handle Harry, it is Snape, very pshycological smart move to ask Harry assisting him to brew the potions, I feel that Harry is slowly starting to trust Snape.Looking forward to the next chapter!
| Title: Part of the Plot
| 19 May 2014 9:48 am
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| Reviewer: Lauryn (Anonymous)
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One of the best, most realistic fanfics ever read. Thanks so much, please update :D
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I really appreciate that. Don't worry, there's an update soon to come.
| Title: Part of the Plot
| 19 May 2014 12:25 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a tricky chapter but very well done! Would be great to get Severus take on the events!
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