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Title: Chapter Three-Drama 25 Jun 2014 11:56 pm
Reviewer: Outlawgal (Signed) [Report This]
    awww love Nape :P So cute
    Ahhh Dumbledore is an ass right now. He will most likely regret having Severus take Harry when school comes around. Harry is going to be Slytherin through and through I have a feeling. He will be Severus's Mini Me
Title: Chapter Two-Close 25 Jun 2014 11:44 pm
Reviewer: Outlawgal (Signed) [Report This]
    At least Harry feels comfortable with Nape :P that he falls right back to sleep.
    LOL the ball scene was great. He doesn't know it yet but he is training Harry for the seeker position already :P
Title: Chapter One-Baby Harry 25 Jun 2014 11:42 pm
Reviewer: Outlawgal (Signed) [Report This]
    Dumbledore is evil and manipulative. Using Lily as a weapon to ring Severus in taking Harry.
    Harry's Nape is so cute.
Title: Chapter Eighteen- A Very Irritable Day 25 Jun 2014 5:57 pm
Reviewer: Lyzasnape (Signed) [Report This]
    This chapter was not boring! :)

    Author's Response:

    It wasn't? Aww thanks! It took plenty re-plays of nature music (A Writer's Block Cure apparantly) to finish it. 

Title: Chapter Eighteen- A Very Irritable Day 25 Jun 2014 3:07 pm
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I love this story-line. Very well written! I like how much baby Harry thinks/remembers!! Everyone gets writer's block - hang in there and keep it up! TOTALLY AWESOME story!

    Author's Response: Awwww thankyou! Your review made my day!
Title: Chapter Twelve-Pain 25 Jun 2014 6:44 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    And Snape sees the light. At least Harry didn't have to suffer too long.
Title: Chapter Eleven-James Potter? 25 Jun 2014 6:40 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    That was an abrupt change for Snape. It's going to be hard on Harry until he sees the light about his behavior. To be fair though, Severus could probably use some time to himself. He's been devoting himself exclusively to Harry and must be feeling burned out by now.

    Author's Response: I guess some wounds run too deep for healing-quoting Dumbledore here. But I don't really blame Snape. James was awful to him.
Title: Chapter Ten-Spending Time 25 Jun 2014 2:01 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    It sounds like Charity has a thing for Snape. I wonder if he feels the same? It didn't sound like it.I hope she can change his mind.
Title: Chapter Nine-Gradually 24 Jun 2014 11:54 pm
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm sorry you had a negative review. I'm enjoying your story. I'm wondering how Harry is going to take to Snape teaching at Hogwarts. He won't have as much time to devote to him and Harry hasn't dealt with his absence very well.

    Author's Response: Yeah I just got one review about how the story didn't make sense. But my other reviews on ff.net convinced me he was just a troll. Well, at least I hope he was. And yes, Snape is going to have to do something to cure Harry completely.
Title: Chapter Eight-A Different Harry 24 Jun 2014 11:47 pm
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    Interesting that Severus and Harry both have the same fear of not being wanted. I like that Charity is showing up in the story as Severus' friend. She doesn't turn up very often in stories and it's nice to see a different staff face.

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