Liked this, nice to read harry as first person, makes a change. His inner monologue was convincing although Snape's reactions in the scenario seemed somewhat unlikely.
Good end line. :)
| Title: The Truth About Being Fine
| 04 Nov 2014 2:40 pm
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| Reviewer: Peaches (Signed)
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Thanks for sharing this, I thought it was excellent. I like the way that Snape didn't blame Harry for not telling Dumbledore about the abuse when he asked not to stay with the Dursleys. And I like the way Harry constantly repeats "I'm fine" and even believes it. It seemed very realistic.
Aww, that is such a sweet story!! Would you consider continuing it? I would love to read it!!
| Title: The Truth About Being Fine
| 05 Oct 2014 3:24 am
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| Reviewer: Panther (Anonymous)
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How refreshing to read a story written in the first person!
Those stories are quite rare, and the first person perspective gives a different, more intimate "feeling" to a story, when it is well done, as it is in this case.
Thanks for sharing, brilliant story!
| Title: The Truth About Being Fine
| 03 Oct 2014 12:53 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Loved it thank you so much!
| Title: The Truth About Being Fine
| 02 Oct 2014 1:37 pm
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| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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Oh wow. Wonderful, fantastic, brilliant story! The characters as so spot on! Great job showing Snape and his emotions from Harry's point of view. I absolutely loved it.
Alright, normally when I start reading a story and see straight away its in the first person I pass it on because it's annoying to me to read them like that. However, this one was special.
I was captivated from the first sentence, and I'm horrible at leaving reviews a I never know how to explain how the story made me feel.
Keep up the good work, this was extremely Well written. Very good! :)
This is REALLY good! Please think about a sequel!! :)
Wow. That was great. I could imagine both characters saying and doing those things. Since Snape is dealing with Harry in a one-on-one setting and doesn't need to maintain a facade, he could let his emotions and feelings show. And after Hallie's death, the emotions would be there in full force for them both. Nice job.
| Title: The Truth About Being Fine
| 01 Oct 2014 9:54 pm
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| Reviewer: anna (Anonymous)
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