Cliff hanger, why do you torture me so with them? GREAT scene with Harry and Snape talking abour Hedwig.
I don't think the wand would actually need to be minature, it should be small enough to fit in the bag and having it the size of a toothpic is dangerous, it could get broken. Fred and George have changed? :( Aww, too bad. Glad to see some familier faces in this chater!
There gonna KILL each otherr, i can't wait, lol. Your breakers look cool, like little winding snakes. :)
Uh oh, Harry was REALLY creepy at the begining, lol. Maia is cool, and I would not leave without my cat eithier...unless I had to.
"My mother lives with ME," lol. We can't have anyone think that Serverus still lives with his mummy, lol. Good job, love it.
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| 18 Jun 2008 4:58 pm
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| Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed)
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Exciting chapter! I like Nick, he only plays a small part doesn't he?
Harry Potter in a car accident is certainly not a story idea that I have seen before on this site. I do remember reading this chapter, but I don't think I reviewed. (Yes, bad me). The idea is very original, great imagination you have there. Too bad Petunia died, :( It would of been interesting to see how she acted once after the crash.
Thank you for writing this!
Harry Potter in a car accident is certainly not a story idea that I have seen before on this site. I do remember reading this chapter, but I don't think I reviewed. (Yes, bad me). The idea is very original, great imagination you have there. Too bad Petunia died, :( It would of been interesting to see how she acted once after the crash.
Thank you for writing this!
Not a bad little story! I appreciate it having been completed. It's pretty frustrating to come across so many other promising tales that aren't finished. Since you wrote it before HBP, that might explain why Mrs. Snape is "Maia" rather than "Eileen"; also the reference to his father being a wizard is likewise incorrect. My favorite bit was in the final chapter, where Maia "put a drop or two of veritaserum" in Dumbledore's tea. Now THAT was truly Snape-like behavior!
Enjoyed your story. Keep writing!
Sincerely,
trust severus' spy
I really liked this story. It was entertaining, differnt from other stories, funny, emotional and surprising. Poor Severus! Those two memories were horrible! I wish you'd write a sequel. Good job AccioSeverus. And, by the way, I love you're pen-name ^_^ wish I could summon him.
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