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Title: Epilogue: First Steps 22 Dec 2014 10:25 pm
Reviewer: Kendra Dhyanna (Signed) [Report This]
    Awww!!!!

    Me encanto esta historia, y espero con ansias la secuela

    preciosa idea
Title: Epilogue: First Steps 22 Dec 2014 10:25 pm
Reviewer: Kendra Dhyanna (Signed) [Report This]
    Awww!!!!

    Me encanto esta historia, y espero con ansias la secuela

    preciosa idea
Title: Epilogue: First Steps 22 Dec 2014 6:56 am
Reviewer: Twonky (Signed) [Report This]
    Fabulous.
    I'm excited about a sequel.
Title: Epilogue: First Steps 21 Dec 2014 9:14 pm
Reviewer: sarahsezlove (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm feeling all warm and fuzzy inside.
Title: Epilogue: First Steps 21 Dec 2014 5:41 pm
Reviewer: Elvira Slytherin (Signed) [Report This]
    This is a fantastic story! Severus's change was very believable. In many cases, when he goes from being the mean teacher to the comforting guardian, the change is too sudden, making the situation feel unreal. This does not happen here. This story is certainly very plausible.

    I hope you write a sequel since I really want to know how this will continue. Poor Harry must be very shocked indeed. Merry Christmas and thanks for a great story!
Title: Broken Promises 21 Dec 2014 4:40 pm
Reviewer: Elvira Slytherin (Signed) [Report This]
    Severus cowering and stuttering in front of an angry Lily is a great sight indeed. The poor guy just didn't know what to do. I love how you characterized both Lily and Severus.
Title: Prologue: Planning Ahead 21 Dec 2014 4:33 pm
Reviewer: Elvira Slytherin (Signed) [Report This]
    This is so sweet! Severus wants to be her husband and have kids that look just like her. That is both lovely and heartbreaking since we know its never going to happen. Great chapter!
Title: Epilogue: First Steps 21 Dec 2014 5:58 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    Hurrah! A sequel! I enjoyed your story so much that I was hoping there would be more. Looking forward to it.
Title: Epilogue: First Steps 21 Dec 2014 12:56 am
Reviewer: teriwright (Signed) [Report This]
    What!? This is it? Gah! I totally enjoyed this story and sincerely hope it's continued.

    The only plot I can imagine is that of Sev and Harry's relationship. Or more specifically, how Severus can possibly atone for the damage and pain he's caused. (Breaking Harry's spirit as well as attempting to break his mind) Perhaps help Harry heal as well as protect him from those wishing him harm (Voldy, DD, Dursley's, The Ministry, The Press, The students, etc)?

    Harry has been hurt so much for so long that it isn't something that easily fixed, or fixed at all. You've created quite a damaged Harry if he's already on the verge of suicide. Quite the uphill battle.

    It's not like a snowglobe will fix everything or instill any sort of trust. It won't even open the door a crack since harry probably - rightly given his history with Snape - will think it's a trick or a lie or some manipulation.

    Maybe a plot could be Sev vs DD. We all know DD see's harry as a means to an end, not as an actual person deserving of love, happiness, safety and protection given his actions (and non) towards Harry. I will admit I'm biased negatively towards DD and haven't read any credible fanfic that can legitimately excuse his cruelty and negligence.

    Another plot could be exploring the effect of Snape's no longer spy status on Slytherin House. LOL, Will Severus finally crack down on sabotage in potions and quit protecting the bullies or will he still show favoritism toward them? Both? I can imagine quite the uprising in the Snake Pit. I can also imagine the implied Green Light those that have suffered under Slytherin and Snape will see it as and attempt to get their own back. Chaos naturally.

    Hmmm....I think those are all the plots I can think of for now.

    Still, I hope to read more of this engaging story.
Title: Epilogue: First Steps 20 Dec 2014 7:39 pm
Reviewer: Lili (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful

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