Lovely long chapter. (Sorry, but I had to laugh at the first paragraph - sunshine at 6.45am in England in December? No chance!! Perhaps it was a magical window.:-D). The boys were so funny in the swearing scene, and in not wanting to miss out on anything. They're going to sleep well after such an exciting day! I hope Remus makes the most of his extra chance, and I look forward to finding out what gifts everyone bought.
Author's Response: Yeah I thinking it was a magical window, England isnt really known for it's sun in the summer. I should have specified lol
| Title: Chapter 12
| 07 Jan 2016 10:27 pm
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Thank you for a lovely long chapter
Author's Response: You're welcome, thank you for taking the time out to review it
| Title: Chapter 11
| 07 Jan 2016 9:45 pm
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Loved it thank you so much
I say Harry should keep the snake.
Author's Response: Theres no pioint in this story for him too, and hes four..its just not plausible
I say harry should keep the snake.
LOL, I'm dying here when thinking about the hassle this outing must have been. The phrase "patience of a saint" comes to mind. It also sound exhausting.
Author's Response: Right? I would have long declared it it over and shuffled on home lol. Can you imagine how exhausted Severus would be lol
That's good. Did you have a good holiday?
Author's Response: I did, did you? I hope you enjoy this next chapter tried to put some humor in it lol
Two hours! I'm so envious. Neville is such a wise little boy, and its nice that he and cute Draco get time to shine in your story. Look forward to finding out if Remus can sort himself out enough to be useful.
Author's Response: Yeah, I type really fast, and my fingers fly on the keyboard when I really get into my writing. Honestly there should be no escuse why I dont update as frequently anymore lol. I'm so glad you adored this chapter, and Remus will be okay I promise.
The boys and their conversations are adorable as always. Poor Neville - there's not quite enough of Severus to go round.
Amazing story. NL needs his own carer and it cant be remus . SB will also be HP obsessed so who will fit? Pomona? They need a female around.
Author's Response: Remus needed a reality check he got it, here. He'll be okay, however I see your point with Pomona and regarding some greenhouses in the back of the Manor. Ooh...you just gave me an idea! Thanks!
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