| Title: What Severus Snape Saw
| 11 Apr 2015 11:52 pm
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| Reviewer: lunaz (Anonymous)
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Snape view of Harry has gotten a dramatic shift. Well done.
Whew! I'm happy Snape is finally opening his eyes but sad that it takes Harry exposing his most vulnerable side to one of his bully's in order for that to happen. What immense courage it took for Harry to do that. Well done Harry!
A great chapter and can't wait for more!
| Title: What Severus Snape Saw
| 11 Apr 2015 11:17 pm
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| Reviewer: Anna (Anonymous)
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Thank you for the quick update, I love it!
| Title: Not Rhys
| 11 Apr 2015 9:00 pm
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| Reviewer: Lea (Anonymous)
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Thanks for another update, that's great.
but - gillyweed.. blee.. :(
But still, I'm very happy, that Severus has thought about something to help with Harry's fear.
I hope, that he will see Harry's scars and bruises and hopefully heal him a little..
ohhh I love how you wrote in Gillyweed! Fantastic! Glad to see Harry and Snape enjoy spending time together!
excellent chapter can't wait for the next
| Title: Not Rhys
| 11 Apr 2015 8:27 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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I'm sure someone has mentioned it but we don't have salamanders, craw dads (what are they!) or garte snakes in Britain. Also they are very lucky with the weather, it usually rains especially in August!
Author's Response: Hi Fmh, according to online there are different types of garter snakes in Britain. These are they typical little non-poisonus snakes in gardens and on trails. Crawdads, also known as crawfish are also in England and have actually become a problem for the country. Also a search of online says there are three different types of newts in Britain, which are salamanders. It's not August yet in the story. It is still earlier in the summer. School has been out for one week when Harry gets taken from the Dursleys, then he spends one week with Rhys, and so far only a week and a half with Snape. The camp doesn't go for the entire summer, so when camp gets out there will still be almost a month of summer left for Harry. Thanks for the review.
| Title: Not Rhys
| 11 Apr 2015 8:27 pm
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| Reviewer: Anna (Anonymous)
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yay finally;) I am glad they are more comfortable with eachother. Looking forward to the pool scene and much more:)
| Title: Not Rhys
| 11 Apr 2015 8:22 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a lovely chapter I like the introduction of gillyweed into the story
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