| Title: Chapter 22
| 17 Dec 2016 9:50 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very good blend of cannon and AU thank you
I don't know why, but knowing that Marble was enchanted in some way makes Dobby seem cruel and this story more interesting
Great job and I think the chapter flowed well. That ending has me wishing for more. I can't wait to see what happens and what trouble Harry gets in.
| Title: Chapter 22
| 13 Dec 2016 12:21 pm
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| Reviewer: Mae19 (Anonymous)
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Great chapter, can't wait to read the next one. Hope Sev listens to what Harry says first instead of yelling at him
Heh, I think Harry could have watched a documentary in the theater and he still would have ended up just as enthusiastic.
| Title: Chapter 21
| 22 Sep 2016 8:48 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a great chapter!
I was so glad to see an update! I really enjoy this story!
| Title: Chapter 20
| 04 Sep 2016 4:10 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Lovely chapter thank you. I like how Severus is portrayed by you he is not coddling but in his own style very kind.
That Severus is doing anything for Harry in the first place is more than he's ever had -just for his birthday- before. Sure, there was Diagon Alley on his 11th, but that was more for school than his birthday. And I wouldn't be surprised if Hedwig was a truly last-minute thing as Hagrid walked by the Owl Emporium.
I look forward to reading how Harry's trip to the movie theatre goes!
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