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Title: Chapter 5 The Patient 24 Aug 2015 9:56 pm
Reviewer: Hesperis (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I would like to see Severus' face when the muggle social workers say that Harry can go with him because of their Father/son relationship. =D ...Is Severus in the muggle world in probation too or does he have a clear criminal record (because magical and mugge world doesn't cooperate)?
    I'm looking forward the next chapter!

    Author's Response: You're right that someone at least will try to defend Severus' rights as a "father"... In my mind the records in the wizard world do not register in the Muggle world, although Snape already told the nurses that he had been on probation long ago...
Title: Chapter 5 The Patient 24 Aug 2015 9:34 pm
Reviewer: Reader629 (Signed) [Report This]
    Curious and curiouser, I wonder what the next chapter will be!

    Author's Response: Here it is... and more to come...
Title: Chapter 5 The Patient 24 Aug 2015 8:12 pm
Reviewer: Eszther (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Thank you for your wonderful, imaginitive story! I fear that Severus' trust in the headmaster is misplaced ...

    Author's Response: The issue with Dumbledore's resposibility for Harry's family life is indeed complicated. I'm not sure I will resolve it completely in this story. See if you like the outcome of the next chapter...
Title: Chapter 4 Surgery 24 Aug 2015 2:03 pm
Reviewer: Hesperis (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow, super chapter. Snape must have been totally freaked out.
    I like the way how you write the medical stuff. I'm looking forward the next chapter. :)
    P.S.: Thank you for the change of the lettering ;)
Title: Chapter 4 Surgery 24 Aug 2015 10:22 am
Reviewer: jadzia66 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I am so loving this story!! Can't wait to see what happens next... you have me on the edge of my seat!
Title: Chapter 4 Surgery 24 Aug 2015 2:25 am
Reviewer: Jeanette (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I am enjoying this story. BTW 3 years ago I had my own experience with appendicitis. It really did feel the way you described. except no evil Aunt tried to kill me lol
Title: Chapter 4 Surgery 24 Aug 2015 2:19 am
Reviewer: BlueWater5 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great build-up.
Title: Chapter 4 Surgery 23 Aug 2015 10:32 pm
Reviewer: teriwright (Signed) [Report This]
    I sort of think Harry losing his magic was Petunia's goal all along. If he died, then no matter in her eyes. Gah, if she "wins" I think I'll cry.

    Not to laugh, but Snape being out of sorts and ignorant would be funny if it wasn't such a dire circumstance.

    I sincerely hope Petunia is punished, legally and harshly for her treatment of Harry. Attempted murder charges could be argued by a half-way decent lawyer I would think. The dehydration alone would support that, let alone refusing medical care. But then again, the entire family participated in depriving Harry of water and medical care. A bit complex isn't it? I can't see the Dursley family remaining free after this in RL.

    I look forward to more! Can't wait to see what happens.
Title: Chapter 4 Surgery 23 Aug 2015 8:25 pm
Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 (Signed) [Report This]
    Will Harry be okay? Or did the surgery come to late?
Title: Chapter 3 Thirst 23 Aug 2015 11:14 am
Reviewer: Hesperis (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hello,
    you have a interesting story there. I'm looking forward the next chapters! :)
    I have one plea though - could you, please write with serif face? It's easier for reading a long texts. Thank you. :)

    Author's Response: Changed it just for you :-) Now that you mentioned it, I think that I have heard that serif face is easier to read, so I'm glad that you pointed it out. When I write I prefer another lay-out. Hope that you continue enjoying the story.

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