I enjoyed this, and like how Draco and Harry got along for the holidays. Snape playing Santa worked well, and he wasn't out of character at it either. This was fun to read.
I like your Severus. He takes his duties as Head of House seriously. I also thought you did a good job with the speech patterns of Snape and Harry. Snape usually speaks so formally and a lot of writers don't think to follow that pattern. It was surprising to see Harry and Draco getting along so well but, after all, it is Christmas.
| Title: Santa's Offer
| 19 Dec 2015 3:30 am
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| Reviewer: shadowienne (Anonymous)
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Fascinating story! I love the deliberately-paced plot, and the fact that Harry's transition into Slytherin territory feels natural. The Christmas room is a great concept, and the silent interplay between Draco and Harry is cool to watch, especially from Snape's point of view. Glad things seem to be working out with Gryffindor in the end!
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| 19 Dec 2015 2:07 am
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| Reviewer: lunaz (Anonymous)
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The emotions you get from listening to Harrys story are overwhelming, loved the story
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| 18 Dec 2015 8:36 pm
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| Reviewer: crotia (Anonymous)
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You really captured the gryffindor impulsiveness well
| Title: Santa's Offer
| 18 Dec 2015 8:32 pm
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| Reviewer: Anna (Anonymous)
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Awesome !!! And I am always happy to See more from you:)
| Title: Christmas Day
| 18 Dec 2015 7:50 pm
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| Reviewer: BlueWater5 (Anonymous)
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Great story! Looking forward to the rest.
I loved this story!!!! :)
Will you please write a one-shot of Sirius and Molly finding out the truth? Pretty please with Christmas on top?
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