| Title: Storms on the horizon
| 12 Sep 2016 7:09 pm
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| Reviewer: nnjjj (Signed)
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I was surprised to see this update. I must have somehow missed it and didn't catch it until I read your other story. Sorry for not being able to review the previous few chapters. I read them when they were posted but have not been feeling well so this will be a joint review. You do a great job as always and I have enjoyed the updates.
I was a bit disappointed in Victoria 2 chapters back when she choose to sneak out, go to the headmaster and then lie to Snape about it. I thought she was pretty rude and wouldn't be too undeserving of a smack or 2 to the backside. Then I was so happy when they somewhat reconciled in the next chapter. It was so sweet. This chapter was great too. I am almost hoping that she will get a glimpse at what a real family is and how they treat and respect each other and come back a little apologetic to Snape regarding her previous behavior. Great job!
Severus may have thought it obvious, but there is just so much of a communication gap between the two of them that his 'present' of visiting her friend's family was lost in the void. Still, a card or a note even would have been welcome. At least otherwise, she's having fun at the Grangers.
| Title: Storms on the horizon
| 10 Sep 2016 2:30 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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I'm so sorry to hear you are ill. I hope you get better soon.
Loved the chapter and Harry getting a normal birthday for once. Please kick Severus into doing something for her soon.
| Title: Victoria
| 10 Sep 2016 2:16 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Somehow I missed this lovely angsty chapter! Thank you so much!
hope harriet has that birthday wish!!
Good. Something broke between the two of them, so now they can start healing and actually -learning- about each other. Oh, it was painful to watch those two interact for the longest time. I'm glad that Victoria is able to still visit Hermione. I think the three days away from each other will give Severus the time to figure out what he actually needs to do, not what he's been doing.
New chapters make me so happy :D
If I was her at the school feast on September 1 I'd refuse to wear the Slytherin clothes and I'd reguyse vto sit at the Slytherin table.
| Title: Victoria
| 04 Aug 2016 8:56 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Roller coaster of a chapter thank you. I was so relieved when he finally hugged her!
glad to see a happier scene with severus and his daughter!! like that victoria get to spend 3 days with the grangers!!
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